Reviews for You Can't Stay Kids Forever
Bea.t11 chapter 30 . 6/15/2017
This was really well done! I really enjoyed this story. I love the entire plot and the relationships of each of the characters. I found it to be so funny when the boys were talking about Tricks when she was sleeping. I loved this story!
Ron W.312 chapter 9 . 9/3/2012
You really get in the characters heads and their attitudes.
Ron W.312 chapter 2 . 9/2/2012
Good story so far. Can't wait to read the rest!
Romantic Journalist chapter 31 . 8/27/2012
Love.
2PMPrincess chapter 31 . 8/11/2012
I absolutely LOVE this story. I think you are an amazing writer! To me, Tricks and Mush will always be together. I don't think I can even attempt to read any other Mush fanfics because Tricks and Mush are so perfect for one another! _
BluuGirl chapter 31 . 8/7/2012
Great story! I can't wait for the sequel! I'm not a huge fan of "getting all intiment" with Mush, but this is a pretty compelling idea for a plot/story. The characters are fleshed out and the complex plot makes it interesting. I'm especially a fan if the story arc about Spot. You don't often find fanfics making him out as a womanizer. Race's dialogue is witty and conveniently placed and even Jack has his good moments. I really hope to see the introduction of Sarah and maybe have David add a little something or other. If anything, the C. Sullivan arc in itself worth waiting for. Thank you for writing this.
EXPRESSIONship chapter 24 . 8/5/2012
Race is portrayed very well in this chapter... Calm and collected...
colette.brunel.3 chapter 31 . 8/3/2012
It's soooo good :) I haven't really loved Mush until now. I hope the sequel is up soon!
Ealasaid Una chapter 31 . 8/2/2012
awesome story, sorry to see it end. I think Tricks is still struggling.
Guest chapter 31 . 8/2/2012
Oh no! Cliffhanger! I must say, you really are a fabulous writer. I can't wait for the sequel! We haven't seen Jack in a while, so is it a possibility that we can see some more brotherly/sisterly stuff coming up? Especially, since it sounds like the conflict will be more personal, with it being their father and all. I don't think I can really express how good this story is! It has been a long 31 chapters, but the end is here. But there is only more to come!
Guest chapter 30 . 8/2/2012
Tricks really needs to stop blaming herself. I thought it was really sweet of Race to tell her that too. She needed to hear it. I hope Mush will wake up soon, and that way we can hear what he did while he was gone. This chapter was excellent, as always! Such a talented and gifted writer. If there was a gold medal for fanfiction, I am sure you would win it!
Ealasaid Una chapter 30 . 8/2/2012
Does Jack or anyone else beside Race knows she blaming herself. how long before she crash? Will Jack be there to catch her?
smiles811998 chapter 29 . 8/1/2012
Sooooo good! Can't wait for moree!
colette.brunel.3 chapter 29 . 7/31/2012
Ahhhhhhhhh! This is soooo good. Please, please, write more. A sequel, another chapter, anything! But I love it, great job! :)
Guest chapter 29 . 7/31/2012
This chapter was really good! I just hope Mush is ok! But if the Delanceys are arrested how does Mush know who the other people are?

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