I'm glad you updated! I must say that I find myself intrigued by the potential possibilities that this meeting with Sena and Akitou could present. Toph would realize that something is wrong with Lin, wouldn't she? Wonder when that's going to happen, though I can't help but hope that significant things happen to Lin during the interim before that occurs. Can't wait for another chapter love, thank you for writing all that you have so far of it.

are we going to get more flashbacks from ehen Lin was in the past?

Hanagai reference?

And we get some OC's, couldn't be avoided I suppose.

You should try using more conversation instead of narration, the blocks of words started to make my head hurt. Don't get me wrong, this chapter provided some interesting background info on Lin, it's jsut that the format could use a little work on. Other than that, keep up the work!

Why would Toph do that to her daughter?!

I guess Aang really matured when he got older, although you can still see the mischief bubbling every now and again.

Wow that really escalated quickly from Lin being apprehensive to Toph being carefree to probing in a flash and Lin breaking down so easily...

Ouch Poor Lin can't find some peace even in her dreams. Then again, it is often in our dreams where we are most helpless.

Hey, it's been a while, love the story!

Well done! You better give us that chapter or else!

This chapter gave me goosebumps...
You my friend can weave a mesmerizing tale, of that there is no doubt.
Good luck in your exams, I will be eagerly waiting for an update!

Woooo finished reading up all 9 chapters so far real glad I found this story, its been very good. now i need to go lie down read them too quickly

It's coming along real nice, albeit a lil slow

Huh that police station sounds like the one by us, never have a vehicle and always taking forever to do anything.
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Just make sure you don't disappear like you did last year or I'll get angry *insert deathly glare*