| Reviews for Warriors of Ouranos |
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   charmanderpika chapter 9 . 10/26/2019 Is it actually Zoey or Zoe from the book? |
| Blufox03 chapter 1 . 6/26/2018 Super good chapter. Don't want to criticise but noticed that the bold title at the top was missing an s |
| Guest chapter 31 . 3/27/2017 you should write books |
| Guest chapter 32 . 12/16/2016 Really nice story compared to other pjo fanfics from other authors |
| DarthDestroyer chapter 32 . 11/12/2016 Sequel! |
| Jacki1987 chapter 1 . 6/14/2016 This is so good! But, doesn't Percy get energized by water? |
| Guest chapter 23 . 2/27/2015 hfhfghgfhfghfghfghfgh |
| bring the money chapter 3 . 9/25/2014 Too many new main characters. Personally u RUINED IT |
| Him chapter 9 . 9/6/2014 Ya spelled Zoe wrong |
| Izzybella12 chapter 32 . 12/29/2013 OMG! This is a super awesome amazing spectacular marvelous story that you have here! In English: I LOVE IT️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️ Please write more amazing stuff like this. I also really liked the wedding scene. I thought it was a nice touch. ️️️️ |
| Plz Boy chapter 31 . 12/26/2013 Plz write a stiry bout Percy and Audrey getting married! |
| Shadow chapter 31 . 8/3/2013 Great story. |
| Spartus365 chapter 9 . 6/10/2013 Zoey who's that |
| jabberwocky1182 chapter 16 . 5/31/2013 "" Close is clear." " lol i think the phrase is "the coast is clear" it originated as saying used by a naval force invading another tribe/country by sea to inform them that it was safe to set to shore and attack. |
| jabberwocky1182 chapter 8 . 5/31/2013 I think this chapter could have some changes made that would improve your story - it would be nice if instead of just repeatedly introducing characters as "this is ..." so and so and they do this and that over and over again for each new character, you introduced the characters more gradually or in groups of two or three through dialogue and as the plot develops. I think it would make it a little less overwhelming and would add detail and make your story have more depth. I like your story and I think it has great potential, I am enjoying reading so far :) |
