he has magic right? why cant he do some tricks so he can escape from the rape?

I want More!

Wow!

I actually strangely really liked this

For one, Darksorcerrer888, this is fiction. Anything can happen. Two, it's the author's story. How can you demand it to be change? and three If you are disgusted with this kind of genre, make your owm. No one is preventing you from reading others.

I feel like I need a shower after reading this.

DarkSorcerer888 B*TCH IT'S F*CKING MAGIC AND THE APOCALYPSE! ANYTHING CAN HAPPEN!

this is so gross and disgusting but wth? I love every word written on this! I am so confused and need to reflect... but first I really really need to read it again... for... research.. material...something.. XD

this story idk if its just me, but was quite hard to read due to poor structuring of story. loved the concept and idea, but it was quite confusing

Gross, i like it

I'm a sick person, I know. Cause I admit that I absolutely loved this one-shot! Please ignore Darksorcerer888. Never do a femharry! (I'm also a slash maniac). People like Darksorcerer888 have no sense of fantasy and imagination to appreciate dark carnal pleasure like this fic. Although, I do find the flashbacks confusing when it was suddenly put into the story with no breaks or indication that it was a flashback. Overall, I would like to thank the author for this written piece as I've enjoyed it.

Okay so this isn't my first time reading this and it's still just as amazing as ever. I was looking through the comments and I just couldn't believe the audacity of DarkSorcerer888 as if they had any right to make a demand like that. MPreg is a lot more common than people think in much more than fan fiction, and you did a wonderful job setting the stage and ambiance. Harry's decent was also spot on and well paced for this story.

Anyway never change what's already here, you wrote it that way for a reason and in my own opinion it's perfect. Otherwise why would I come by to refresh my memory of it once in a while.

i agree. dont make a femharry... and please more... love it.

So it was disturbing on so many fucking levels that its insane... But I can't help but love it. Literally the thought of poor Harry getting into that situation then basically saving the world in a way that no one would have thought to imagine. I loved it. It was awesome.

First let me say: I ignore that dark sorcerer post from blow. Like entirely. NEVER make a fem-Harry fic. EVER.
Now on with my review! Loved the fic. It was well written and while half of it was some disturbing sex scenes it actually has a plot that is capable of being expanded on. Now I will have to say that the flash backs got a little confusing as you would be in the middle of a scene and then a random flashback would pop up that would confuse me as I would begin to read it like it was part of that scene. Perhaps you could italicize the flashbacks to make it less confusing?
Well anyways great fic I hope to read more from you!

FoE