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Guest chapter 12 . 10/2/2015 Plz plz update |
QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 12 . 12/10/2014 I hope an to see an epic battle between those 2 teams. I love writing battle scenes. |
QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 10 . 12/10/2014 I liked it. Shave Paul's eyebrows? *Looks at Paul* Paul: Queen, you're going to say something, aren't you? Don't reveal your plans. Me: Paul, you're the only one I have clothing plans for; in His Distance, anyway. Paul: Oh boy. Anyway, me with shaved eyebrows. Me: Not something I'd like to see. Or think about. Paul: Agreed. You think about Montessori... Me: Already doing that. Paul: And I'll give you ideas, even though I'm sure you have some on clothes for me. Me: Deal. |
QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 9 . 12/10/2014 Good night right now. Paul: You're not going to bed anytime soon, are you? Me: Nope. |
QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 8 . 12/10/2014 Black & White. I think it's interesting. *goes to look for food |
QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 4 . 12/10/2014 Yeah, I've noticed that Torterra grunts like Paul. Paul: Queen, come on. Give me a break. Me: Paul, you're one of my favorites to write. Paul (sighs, knowing I'm right) : Why do you agree? Me: Professor Oak. Paul: Oh, yeah. Man, you really want the crossovers to stay up, don't you? Me: Of course. You & Ash on the same team is going to be fun & challenging. Paul: Please tell me he's slightly smarter in each crossover? Me: Yeah, he is. Plus, each crossover revolves (at some point) Ash explaining- Paul: AU of how you're writing him in the Unova League? Me: Yeah. |
QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 2 . 12/10/2014 Good title for the chapter. |
QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 1 . 12/10/2014 I liked it. |
XxCherriesandChocolatexX chapter 12 . 6/2/2014 DUM DUM DUUUUUUM! Uh oh, I sense ACTION AND DRAMA! :D If these stupid Team's realized that if they all just used their ideas/money/machinery together, they probably could have actually accomplished something by now. It's good for us though XD REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO YOUR NEXT UPDATE! But until then, off to review bomb the rest of you... |
XxCherriesandChocolatexX chapter 11 . 6/2/2014 Aww poor N! :( That was really sad, but he WAS being a little unfair on Paul and Dawn. You don't just TAKE someone elses Pokeballs! Not to mention be a hippy about spreading his thoughts. It's not his job to tell other trainers what they can and can't do O.o |
XxCherriesandChocolatexX chapter 10 . 6/2/2014 I love how they say they're supposed to be liberating Pokemon, and yet they USE pokemon to do it. Hippocrates much? Poor Bianca and Cheren! DX |
XxCherriesandChocolatexX chapter 9 . 6/2/2014 I really like the idea of having these shoots, it adds something different into the fic and variety other than than usual travelling and battling kind of stuff. Really great chapter, you two work SO well together! |
XxCherriesandChocolatexX chapter 8 . 6/2/2014 *sigh* Guards are so frustrating. Always with the questions... LURVED THIS UPDATE! Things just keep getting more interesting :D Sorry Amy, I'm actually a Ferriswheelshipper...*covers head* PLEASE DON'T KILL ME! NUUUUU! IT WAS MIST, SHE INTRODUCED ME TO IT BEFORE I COULD READ ANY BLACK/WHITE FICS! I'M SORRRRRRRRRRYYYYYY! DX *runs away* |
XxCherriesandChocolatexX chapter 7 . 6/2/2014 PAUL SAY WHAAAAA?! HE CALLED HER DAWN! HE ACTUALLY SAID IT! WHAT ARE THIS?! *feints* Wow, this chapter was so intense! You seriously had me on the edge of my seat through the whole thing! |
XxCherriesandChocolatexX chapter 6 . 6/2/2014 Pokemart inside the Pokecenter...OF COURSE DX Bwahahahaha! The brothers were so funny XD CILAN, YOU ARE AWESOME! Hmm...now I feel like cake O.o |