When alister said "Will you marry me?" I just started doing a fangirl scream...It sounded like an hyena on stariodes XD

I love so very cute
I love ship of alister x ratchet, and you fanfiction so perfect

(**) I love this, I love you for making this, LOVE.

Okay, after two serious reviews, I felt it was time to go back to what I call a "raw-emotion review."
But first: seriousness.
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I came into this expecting exactly what I got. And I'm sure that anyone with the ability to perform logical deductions would be expecting such a thing as well.
I loved it. End of story.
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EMOTION TIMEZZZZZZZZ!1!ONE!
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*many rabid fan-girl sqeals*
*faints*
*regains consciousness*
*causes some random by-stander's ears to bleed from more squealing*

Cool

OMG that was so cute and sweet! I love a good cute story with the two...

W...T...FUCK!?

Hmmm... I like your stories a lot, and they don't have enough alisterxratchet (they don't have enough ratchetxANYTHING involving yaoi), but may i point out a couple of things? First off, you don't really specify that they're going out,and if they aren't, I don't think he would ask to marry him right when he figures out they both love each other... relationships and true love never really works out like that. Usually it ends with the couple marring in las vegas by a casino manager durring a 20 dollar wedding and then they break up 3 days later after on of them steals the others money... well, thats how it usually works out if its realistic. and if they arent actually going out, i dont think they would start making out when they see each other. :P i hope my feedback helped *ducks behind table* and if it didn't, please don't kill me.

Good oneshot :) I like how you included them getting married, no other Ratchet and Alister stories are doing that (at least not yet). And I can't wait for another update on the Blue Orb

I absolutly LOVE IT! I also love the picture! Great work!