Amazing! The banter is wonderful and the characters are on-point and omggg when it cut to the ice king I literally LOL'd. This is awesome!

LMAO ICE KING SO FAB AND POOR GUNTER. XDDDDDDDDD Ice King is basically every fandom tbh XD

WHY ICE KING nah jk. God bless this pathetic man tbh mmmmm he created the shipping ;)

The writing and story line was pretty good. However, the "sex scene" has some serious issues. One, is consent, which Fionna is unable to give because she is drugged. This is sexual assault as defined by law. Two, there is a decided lack of communication when it comes to "going all the way" where Fionna is unsure of what that entails, another big no no. Other than that, quite nice but please do something about the sex scene because drugged people cannot give consent EVEN if they appear to want to have sex. This is a very troubling aspect of rape culture and I see it perpetuated far too often among teens and young adults on this site.
Thanks so much.

IM IN LOVE WITH YOU

and this story hehe

I loved this chapter so much; it was written well and I loved that the characters were /in/ character. From Marshall Lee teasing Fionna and Cake to Fionna's innocence and everything in between. I love the chemistry between these two and that little bit where Marshall Lee pretends that all of the kissing that they had done was just him cleaning her up - brilliant! Oh man, I really loved this chapter, it was just super great. Nice work!

This is supersmexyfunnystuff.

I'm in love with this

Excellent work! I loved it! You managed to capture the feel of the show very well. It felt like an actual episode, though one that wouldn't be shown on cartoon network. ;)

This was great. I think this is the first fanfiction I've read that actually managed to make me blush.
Writing - 10/10
Plot - 10/10
Smut - 10/10
Overall - 1000/10

This entire story was beautifully written.
I loved that it wasn't all smut like other stories I've read.
The characters did sound like themselves...
You should write more...
Maybe a sexy story of Gumball and Marceline?
*hardcore shipper*

Aw that was really cute

I like it so far, Marshall Lee sounds like the perfect douche lol

I LOVE this story! You're a fantastic writer, please write more of this pairing in the future, because you have talent.

Continue! Continue! CONTINUE!