I liked it!

Lovely look at Leo's inner thoughts here. Bravo!

Awww, such beautiful interaction between the dueling brothers.

I can see Leo behaving like this, it's such a wonderful insight into the inner workings of Leo's mind, of his faults and failings that he hides so well behind his cool, calm demeanor.

Golly gosh I truly love this work, I love Leo's "humanity" in this, love how you portray him with thoughts and feelings no different to his brothers ... he's just better at hiding them.

Great job Simone, truly ...keep up the wonderful work!

wow. that was beautiful. everything just flowed together. i like your style of writing.

This had to be my favorite line: "As a leader, he acknowledged his flaws. As a warrior, he refused to submit to them." It just seems so like Leo to think that way.

Its nice to know that if he's at one end of a rope, his family will always be at the other end pulling him back up from wherever he's fallen. Beautiful story, great job.

I thought it was really good :) I love Leo

... I don't know what to say other then: Amazing. simply, utterly, and completely amazing! Well done. Keep up the good work!

T-Girl is out! Peace!

Wow. I really liked it and how you described Leo's fear at times. It was great and very well done. Good job on this, Sim.

The Bubbly One,
Shell