see what you did! now I have to find some fluff to read. loved your story

...ummmmm...wow

I find it intriguing that such a short, but powerful tale draws such deep emotions from your readers. They either love it or hate it intensely...and That, after all, is what a good writer wants.
Lovely story, I think it should have been listed as: Romance/Drama/Tragedy unless you wanted that build up to a dreaded tragic ending...hmmmm.

:'(

: grrrrrrrr

:D

:)

Loved it!

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Loved it! Yay they finally make up!

Loved it! He finally realized his feelings for her!

I just found this story and though it's complete and I don't know when this chapter in particular was written I feel compelled to say now until getting to the end of the story: it is well written and though yes the chapters are short they have an engaging and enticing affect, making the reader want more. My grammar is not the best so excuse me. As for asking for reviews, there was nothing impolite in the request. If you received reviewers that complained then some of your reader are infantile... you are sharing your talent and they should be grateful it's not like they are paying you for a service this is a favor you are doing us as well as yourself. Thank you for sharing your gift and I, for one am grateful for your wit and alternate storyline... gotta go so I can finish this Bitchin' fanfic

That story is beyond beautiful. I genuinely can't stop crying.
This story was just about short enough that I felt that I could read it before going to sleep. I thought it would be a glorious tale of how Jasper fixes Bella and they find comfort in each other. What do you know, I was wrong. As a result I now have to go find another story because I cannot go to bed feeling melancholy.
But just so you know, for the fact that I am inconsolable at half one in the morning, you are a horrible person and I hate you.
In all seriousness though, I absolutely adored this story. I am a bit of a masochist, so I do love the feels. ;)

It was fantastic. Congratulations on a truly moving piece.
-Stacy x

I cried... Crap, I never cry! Beautiful story, it's absolutely perfect.

Holy Jesus. Why did you do that to meeee? This is probably the most well written and saddest story on fanfiction. My life sucks. I just ha to find it. You shood definitely write an alternate ending for me just because you love me that much. Anyways, I super appreciate all the hard work you put into this story. An the plot was just perfect! I loved how everything worked out almost true to the book. Besides the very tragic ending. I just love this coupling. I always thought jasper and Bella should go together. You did them justice! Thanks sooo much. I'm gonna go check out your other stories. Bye!
oria