| Reviews for I'll Have the Usual |
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PsychoPudding chapter 1 . 9/2/2012 I should be sleeping. Instead I'm crying my eyes out...That was...heartbreaking...amazing...touching...inspiring...wow... |
Valkry1 chapter 1 . 8/31/2012 Wow. This is so amazing. Like, it really, really is! This was FANTASTIC for a first attempt! This would be a fantastic piece of work at any level of writing! There were some grammatical errors, but your characterization and plot just filled me with feels! Keep writing! |
My Own Mayday Parade chapter 1 . 8/31/2012 Really heart felt and emotional. Very good first try. There're a couple mistakes with the placement if some words but that's ok. Great overall job. |
Keepmovingforwar chapter 1 . 8/28/2012 d2- awesome! But so sad... |
randommonkeyz998 chapter 1 . 8/28/2012 This is really great! I love it! |
Jncera chapter 1 . 8/28/2012 You just killed me with feels. Oh my gosh. I can't. I can't function right now I'm drowning in too many feels. I think if I re-read that fic one more time I will just collapse into tears. Your writing really captures the emotions, and no one was OOC! And that last paragraph. Talk about a powerful ending. |