Reviews for I'll Have the Usual
PsychoPudding chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
I should be sleeping. Instead I'm crying my eyes out...That was...heartbreaking...amazing...touching...inspiring...wow...
Valkry1 chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Wow. This is so amazing. Like, it really, really is! This was FANTASTIC for a first attempt! This would be a fantastic piece of work at any level of writing! There were some grammatical errors, but your characterization and plot just filled me with feels!

Keep writing!
My Own Mayday Parade chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Really heart felt and emotional. Very good first try. There're a couple mistakes with the placement if some words but that's ok. Great overall job.
Keepmovingforwar chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
d2- awesome! But so sad...
randommonkeyz998 chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
This is really great! I love it!
Jncera chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
You just killed me with feels. Oh my gosh. I can't. I can't function right now I'm drowning in too many feels. I think if I re-read that fic one more time I will just collapse into tears. Your writing really captures the emotions, and no one was OOC!
And that last paragraph. Talk about a powerful ending.