I really want a continuation of this ; A; I've literally reread it dozens of times!
Seeing as how Leon and Cloud sired Roxas, couldn't that possibly mean that Axel could have impregnated Roxas, and after returning told him of the children? I'd love to try and write a continuation myself! ; v;

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I have to agree with Neko vani-kun Khotaku1999. This was absolutely amazing! It satisfied the side of me that loves torture and abuse, but at the same time it made me cry! Literally, I mean it! That's how well you wrote this thing, because I have never cried in a fanfiction or book! Not to mention it takes a lot to stir these types of feelings. This was also a great inspiration for one of my own books, thank you so much!

Whoa... o.o

That.
Was.
Amazing.

HOW DO YOU DO THAT?! YOU WORK IS SIMPLY CRAZY AWESOME!
OUTSTANDING JOB!

I sorta wish there was a part two!

My oh my I applaud you for your most wonderful work. I read this and couldn't believe that this is just one of the best completed works I've read in weeks. Bravo. I LOVE it.

wow you did a really good job on this i say, i really enjoyed it a really good fanfic.

I loved it i have a sick twisted side for angst and gore and torturer i dunno why but i really do love it in a strange way
you write beautifully and the details you put in the story were fantastic
i loved it
great writing!