Nice.

Luv it, luv it, luv it.
It was seductive and sweet.

Now... This is a good NaZa! I loved this One-Shot. Some kind of continuation would've been amazing :P

Awesome! NatZa FTW! :D

Wow..! It's awesome..!
Cool man, keep writing stories..
Hwaiting..! :)

THAT. WAS. AWESOME.
you are awesome.
i love this game. i will never look at blackjack the same way ever again.
and i will never see/hear the "im all fired up" thing the same way ever again.

Bravo. Not bad, not bad.. hahaha it's been wayyy too long since I've reviewed any of your stories.. But don't be feeling left out now, I just got some catchin' up to do )

And yes, I enjoyed it. Keep it up alright?

I loved it, simple as that.

There! See? You asked me what I thought of you as a writer, and I never got back to you. So I'll tell you right now that this is a huge part of what makes you a great writer! Whatever pairing you write, you manage to capture its essence at one point or another, and this is the essence of NatsuxErza! Boy meets girl and star-crossed lovers are fine for some people, but this brought out the pure animal magnetism between Natsu and Erza! I'm not saying this pairing is all about being sexy, of course, and my one complaint is that you didn't really delve into their feelings as well as I'd like, but you know what? This story is pure sex (not literally, of course), and that's fine by me. Keep it up, man. Keep it up.

Oi Oi, getting into my ecchi comedy niche here? Lol no worries about it. Glad that I inspired something like this. It's a very good short story. The burning sensual excitement that people expect from a Natza fanfic is really strong with this. Loved it.