No matter how late you may be, I am thrilled that you still update this amazing fic! I love it to bits and check in every few months to see if there's an update.

I do agree that the ending to the fight was anticlimactic but I feel it was in a good way. It was fitting for what the story needed and fits the characters well!

I find myself returning to this fic at least once a year to re-read and marvel at how well you capture Neuro.

This was utterly BRILLIANT. Exasperated dad!Emperor showing up and grabbing the two of them by the scruff was seriously the perfect ending for that fight. I can't wait to see what more will be revealed once they've cooled down enough to actually communicate xD

Ergh, the problem with having email alerts in a different folder from the main...means that one inadvertently misses them. BUT I'm more than ecstatic that I checked and saw this! I can't tell you how long I've been waiting for this! (I mean, I know the exact time, but the feeling...the FEELING was like centuries sometimes) I'm sorry to hear that your two chaps were flung into oblivion, but happy to hear that you a) saved one and b) will be rewriting the one you couldn't save.
In reply, I don't think you resolved it too quickly. To me, at least, it felt just right and Neuro's Father was just the right entity to end it. I love how you showed just how much more damn powerful he is than either of them in a tasteful, simple way that puts them and their titan battle to shame. Heck, Neuro was already described as gargantuan and then you go and say that he was but a puny thing hanging in his Father's jaws, unable to break free or retaliate. The imagery that invoked...lol!
I've never left a review here (because when I first read, there had been at least a year in between updates and I was like, well, maybe...it was dropped...?) but just wanted to let you know that you have an eager beaver here ready to inhale your tale! I don't think it's an exaggeration to say that yours stands out in the crowd for being true to the characters, yet adding new dimensions to them that don't deviate from who they are at the core. Neuro, in particular, impressed me because from Anatomy to Token, I can't recall ever thinking, 'wow, Neuro's OOC as heck. Yeah, nope.' He grows, but is still Neuro, y'know? I love how you've captured his incomprehension, curiosity, all the insanity and that larger than life aura that makes him the Neuro we know and love, the brilliant demon who's a complete newbie when it comes to emotions, as he fumbles through his relationships, how you expressed his gradual learning and changes in thinking. Argh, words fail me. And don't even get me started on the other characters, seriously.

Also, with the aim of keeping this short(er), I love how you did your own world-building with Hell and Neuro's parents and doing it so well that I wish it was canon.

Did I mention that I'm overjoyed? Thrilled? All related synonyms? xD Please do keep updating! I truly love the tale you've spun so far. I'm seriously looking forward to what happens next (and I have absolutely no issues with an info dump if it'll shed light on what I don't know and give me more insight into the world you've created. There are way too many things I'm in the dark about here haha) I'm two months late but welcome back and I hope to read the next chapter soon!

As much as I'm looking forward to more info about the Demon Emperor revealed in this chap, I'm also very much looking forward to the two puppies coming to their senses before Lord Top (Three-headed) Dog. Imagine the chagrin xD

I loved it! I can't wait for your update!

So happy you’re back! I liked the chapter :)

I was so happy to see this was updated, its still my favorite neuro/yako fanfiction! I loved how the fight ended, and I can't wait to read chapter 17! Thankyou you much for your hard work on this series, its honesty a pleasure to read! -

Yes yes yes YES TO EVERY WORD OF THIS CHAPTER.

I honestly don't care how long it takes you to upload a chapter as long as you still are updating. I'm definitely going to be rereading neuro and then this entire fanfic cause I have terrible memory but that what I love about this story.

I wasn't expecting to the emperor to show up but now a possible...relative of Neuro? My brain is just firing on all cylinders on what this possible might mean.

I loved that so much! totally worth the wait! No I don't think it ended abruptly, I think that was fine, and I eagerly look forward to the next chapter. I wanna draw that beast fight sometime.

So happy you’re updating gain! This was amazing!

Thank you so much for this chapter!

I don't feel the end of the battle was anticlimatic, you established the two were about equals in power and can't kill each other, so there was not really any other way than "papa" Demon Emperor (lol) breaking the "kids" fight. Honestly, I feel it was just the right lenght. Dragging it on for too long wouldn't help the story move forward.

About Yako too. It's normal for a human to take time to recover from big injuries. If she was to recover too fast it wouldn't make any sense and the injury would be "just another plot device" thrown in there and abandonned. I do not feel like she's weak. Her body may be weak, but her character stays strong.

I know info dump are best to be avoided, but sometime you can't, you just have to work around them, try to scatter bits here and there. Maybe, try working with Neuro searching for confirmation about things he might have found within himself, rather than plainly having one demon info dumping to the other. Make the information be known to the reader in a way that don't feel forced. Put some in the narration rather than all in a dialogue between characters. I'm sure there's other ways too. It's hard work but I think you can manage it.

I look forward to reading what you have planned next.
(Sorry for any typo and such, I'm on my phone and I tend to mix some letters on this "keyboard", haha!)

I'm really glad you are doing well. I've always loved this story, and this chapter was worth waiting for. I hope for the best for you, and I don't mind waiting again :3

Love to see you back ! I'd have find it weirder if Yoko was able to just get up and stop the fight between the two, like you said, she's just human. Neuro's transformation was great !

I'm just so glad that there's new update. Thank you a lot. I really thought this fandom was forgotten and you created such a pleasant surprise3

Oh shit Neuro's a bigass griffin! I hope this isn't the last we'll see of his true form, because I'm always down for our favourite monsters Being monsters yknow?

Also, with Otto's comment about him no-longer being a pup... Is Neuro going thru demon puberty? Is he gonna be a hormonal bastard now? How does this change things between him and Yako?