Yay 11th Doctor makes an appearance! As bittersweet as it is. He is intentionally vague about what happens to her. However as close to the show as this has been, l'm pretty sure l know where its leading for her. I will be pleasantly surprised if it doesn't happen. That would be cool.

Such an interesting new adventure for my favorite duo. I was surprised that the Doctor didn't figure out it was Rose, from her eyes and name, Adolpha. It was interesting seeing how River got the poison to kill the 11th Doctor.

I loved this. Please say in the end Rose does find the future Doctor, I would be so sad if they didn't. :3

I'm really trying to get into this story, but for future reference, take care to choose one tense or the other. The constant switching between past and present tense is driving me crazy.

loved it

Oh my God! This story is absolutely fantastic! The whole idea of Rose still being there is great and all too easy to imagine, but honestly hun, this story is brilliant. I love reading and will obviously go on to read the others. I can't wait for Donna. Thanks for writing hun. Love ya!

Ok, so, love a rose/10 fic. But I've got three bits of constructive criticism for you.

First, dialogue should be in proper quotes (") not (').
Second, you have some tense issues. I'm seeing a big mix of past and present tense, sometimes even in the same story. Now I know this is doctor who, but that doesn't mean throwing the rules of writing out the window. For narrative, the tense should stick to past, since present sounds more like stage instructions. In dialogue is really the only place that the rules of writing aren't important because it's what a person is saying, and they could be totally butchering the English language as they say it.
Lastly, you made Rose and Martha too interchangeable. 95% of Martha's original dialogue was given to Rose, much of it too naive to have come from Rose. The minor changes were TOO minor to really see a difference between Rose and Martha just based on dialogue. What I mean by that, is that, with how well I remember the episodes, even though I'm reading that it is Rose that is saying something, I still picture it in my head that it's Martha saying it. There were only two, maybe three, lines of dialogue where I could imagine it was Rose saying it.

OHMIGOSH! Martha... Wha...? You know what? NEVERMIND!
(My friends say I'm crazy. I don't believe them.)

Please don't ever refer to EMTs or Paramedics as ambulance drivers ever again. Please. Seriously. That's HIGHLY offensive. Other than that, awesome story.

Thank you so much for this story!
You've kept me hooked and I'm so happy to see there is a continuation! I can't wait to read the rest!

look forward to your continuation story...still a bit nervous of how Rose's adventures with the Doctor are going to end but am hopeful it will be a good conclusion...your stories have never failed to entertain.

Ok, I just recently found your stories, and I loving them so far, however, the last part of this chapter just broke my heart. I want to know what happened, but I have a feeling it will just break my hear further.

I was oscillating as to whether or not to read this story, but then I realized that I couldn't stomach the thought of reading the entirety of a 172,366 word story where All of the dialogue was done incorrectly, without double quotations ("x").

Ok now I'm smad. Sad and mad. He's gonna leave her in JE isn't he? We'll I'm gonna go cry in a corner.

Read it all in one sitting! Great!