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Guest chapter 6 . 2/13/2019 I Love it. Continue, please |
inka363 chapter 6 . 7/6/2018 update soon |
Debbie Hicks chapter 6 . 2/11/2018 7. SONG Then ATTACKED Bittyen with her with five were eight or ten then m y powers erupted then gashed m auled drain ed as all of blood turn ed by force then then Voltlturi found m e turn ed yoiung then you there where's your makers Felix rid of tese n ewb orns then Execution of us were not hum an s our scernt from her they are hybridsd MURDERED The ser had a vision of our deaths drain ed far too gone then were not aliv e then we have to get them too late then were drained b y force m y gift suddenly rumbled CARILISLE! Too late deceaased then were wityh them then KILLED By them suddenly resurrectede look t's a Jungle b lasaying Frely with m yu sister then frozen completely solid blewe freely Alice hey ben attacked urgh watch the v in es busters Liv yup look at me I'm Poisonous but deadly don 't fool with m e POPPED B ring them this one has a gift so her sister with then blown but too later b roiught here they did it drain ed b y sn akes as all of blood good they cannot die are transformed are hybrids bew frely with them b ring them here then too late was really toxic waste really glowing myself weas reborn changerd b ut really blooming Alice she wasa splilled with the snakes bittenbut had b en drained but a sudden force of nature it's Geogenesis so her sister with them have hun ted as all of animal they been altered but sedes saved followed then blew freely weith them then too late brought here then suddenlu killing then but too late guaerds poison ed with deadly blood was toxic waaste then they done this hold more as all of them are dead from theire blood at birth now at adulthood they are sentenced to death are drain ed good then Atomized but b ombed Carlilse was horrified what she become deadfly but poisonous watch it Jake my kiss will drive you mad got it Chaiuned SNAPPEDBut with the kids this one kills both they are guilty fled then brought here then killed them n owe too late from the bodysuit I Am poison popoped freely with my sister dressed like her b lown then b rought them ugh what is scent she smelt like a Jun gle flower of toxic waste rid of them with them then too late murdered for testing then too late n am es were listed then too late that's some bodysuit whoo we what are you she's poison don't kiss her she will be mad b y her scent really oh my god your blood is dllitutede with ours rebuilt itself from animals mine from the Amazon oh no then reborn now too late came too late myself was different so her then n ever aged but never gone oldest as the same then too late Crashed freely then brought here reported they are drained from guards assassinated them from here they were destroyed they replaced by more what ugh what is that corpse flowerly stench then too late atomizerd from here but wiped out now too late were unable to have kids Alice had a vision of our origins were not humans oh m y god they did this urgh what is that aroma me you are not human s then blown from here came too late brought here killed. |
Reader chapter 6 . 2/1/2018 Please continue x |
Katherine.See.Katherine.Do chapter 2 . 11/12/2017 As much as I like the story and I do you fudged the age you say on the leap year the Technically she's 4 years old and yet she's turning 14 that's inaccurate |
Maeve chapter 6 . 2/18/2017 Keep on going! |
Guest chapter 6 . 9/27/2016 This really good, please update |
esthealice17 chapter 6 . 9/24/2016 Can I just say that I absolutely love this story! |
Macygracie16 chapter 6 . 4/14/2016 I now that this is an old story but I was wondering if you ever thought of continuing it? Either way its a great story! |
Guest chapter 6 . 3/27/2016 I love this! Its amazing! I've read published books that weren't written this well! |
snowbarry11 chapter 6 . 3/12/2016 I dying for the next chapter |
ThePirateQueen367 chapter 6 . 7/4/2015 Ohmigosh! This is so amazing please update! |
oikawatooruu chapter 6 . 6/18/2015 I really love this and hope you update it soon! |
Guest chapter 6 . 2/1/2015 I seriously love this story so much! Like jake and liv? AHMAZING! Cannot wait for the next chapters |
sassincarnate chapter 6 . 12/28/2014 Okay, so, I'm posting this on December 28th, 2014, and I'm begging you to, please, continue this AMAZING story. Like, honestly, this is the BEST Twilight fanfiction I have EVER read, and you are going to make me go crazy if you don't update, because I see you haven't updated for a while. So, I'm asking you to please not give up on this fanfiction. And if you are, please put an A/N, so I can go cry until 2015 and beyond. |