Gorgeous, longing, evocative... this is wonderful!

Beautiful. Heartbreaking. Very well-written. Your Thane is very much the Thane I imagine. Just wonderful. Truly, I have no adequate words.

This is fantastic! I would love to see more. :) Outstanding job!

OP here, pleased as hell to see this on FF! This still does the most exquisitly painful little things to my heart, every little nod to the lyrics is beautiful. Oh Thane honey, why do you have to be such a damn sweet guy when Shep was already so bound up with her man...

You have accomplished the goal of making me feel guilty. Hurrah! And you did it damn beautifully.

Freaking well done, and I hate you for making me cry Lol! Good work!