fuck. that was so hot

SO FREAKING HOT! For a moment there, I couldn't breathe. *Fans herself* Thank you for writing and posting! )

holy hell that was hot.
"i could bear it no longer" oh god...
good call with the poems, i love it

I loved it! Beautifully written and I love how it's not all about sex but it has that love and passion in it too. Very, very, good job! :)

*happy shiver* Lit!kink. Excellently executed and unnfff Dean getting off on it.

That was...poetic, to say the least. So intense, so intimate...beautifully done. I don't think enough fanfiction focused on that sort of thing, the anticipation, the real passion of it all. Of course, I'm a virgin, so I'm not one to talk, but still. Anyway, thank you for writing this, it was fantastic. :)

I really loved this. I enjo the fact that Cas was basically explaining what he was doing through poetry. BRILLIANT Keep it up!

Dang...that was hot! Chapter two perhaps :P