I LOVED THIS SOOOO MUCH! I was smiling the whole chapter. Though it would be nice if there is a new chapter or update..

this was really good. i love your characterizations. feels realistic. and i'm glad you didnt make it explicitly romantic, cause that would be way too rushed at this point in their relationship :)

aaawwww soooooooo kawaii!

No kiss or even a hug? how not romantic.

AAAAAH lovelovelove LOVE it - this was very well written! I'm hopeful that there'll be a sequel...or sequels (whichever you prefer), to capture more of the 'romance' aspect ;-)

I know it says "one-shot", but I can't help wanting more! This is amazing

This is really good, both in characterization and grammar. You should continue this. I'd love to read more.