Lol gray -.-

I lovee it sooooo much *passes out do to blood loss from a nose bleed*

I really enjoyed this story, thank you so much for writing it love! (~)

This was very very well done. I look forward to your other works. (There was one mistake as I had seen. When meaning to write "the guild members" you wrote "the guild member") Gastu

fuck ya

I fangirled so hard I died and then Mavis brought me back to life like "nonono, you still got a whole four paragraphs to read missy!"

You, sir, know how to write one hot fanfic. They're usually not all that great but yours is the best I've ever seen. You deserve five out of five stars! Your phrasing was sometimes awkward, but it was HOT and not many people have the skill you do.

nicely written

I absolutely loved it! But poor Grey haha

I want more of these stories please.

Gray: Natsu's mine dammit!

Gajeel: Sucks should of claimed him faster.

Gray: Why you!

Natsu: Guys don't fight we're a family! There's enough of me to go around!

Gajeel:*Glares* You are mine and mine only Natsu, get it in that cute, naive little head! *Smooches*

Gray: NOOOOOOOOOOOO!

XD please write more

Haha! I like!

very...very /intense/...loved it tho XD

XD HAWT SO VERY HAWT!AND FUNNY!

Awesome story.. :D
But do you realize that the "uke's" name is always the first you write in a pairing..? not matter the genders of both parties...
If you take it typically from when people cute the name of their lover and themselves into a tree circled by a heart, it's normally the woman or uke's name which is first...
and it's not that people do it that way because they feel like it.. it's common knowledge and the correct way of doing things... "

Sorry, I really felt that I needed to tell this to someone, since so many makes that mistake. And by making that mistake leaves many people confused and they would most likely think that the actual male or seme part is the uke... o-o"

Once again sorry if you feel that it's annoying that I'm pointing out this matter... "