Although I've liked the character development in previous chapters, it's also nice to return to some action.

This has turned out to be a different kind of witch story and I like it.

This is an older story, but I'm just now getting into the pairing.

I am just blown away by this work. The way you wrote was so descriptive, it painted such a vivid image, really calling on my experiences with the show. The dialog, the interactions, the character designs, everything was written so faithful to the series that it was hard not to see it as Canon.

Thank you for writing a lovely story to fill a rough night. Even though this work is finished, I wanted to let you know it brought me a ton of joy.

I love this fanfic and I'm so sad it ended . The raw emotion it showed just was amazing . I honestly loved zoro he's so coooool . :P

Amazing! This story put me into tears!
Such an amazing story!(:

The way you write Nami makes me like her a little more. I would love to read your take on the crew being separated. This was a great story, write on sister.

I AM A SMILING, JUMPY MESS RIGHT NOW HOLY COW I AM SO HAPPY WITH THIS WHOLE STORY! You’re a phenomenal writer! I could not put my phone down until I finished it. The plot and their relationships and characterization and... everything! Absolutely stunning ️️️ Be very proud

loved the story ! sooo good !

This is one of the best multi-chapter stories I ever read! I LOVE the way the story is building up, how their relationship evolves and how they open up to each other, all the beautiful fluff between them that was nearly to much to bear, how you can feel their connections while reading the story... the whole plot was interesting and thought through! Nami saving Wado was so so wonderful and the ending... well, it just made the whole thing perfect!

oh my freakin gosh... OH, MY FREAKIN' GOSH! THIS STORY IS SO AWESOME! MY HEART JUST MELTED ON THE FLOOR ALONG WITH MY BODY FROM TOO MUCH LOVE FOR THIS STORY!

I'm actually a LawxNami fan but I tried to read a ZoNa story and i stumbled upon this and... hands up, this is one of my fuckin faves. Now ZoNa's coming close to my love for LawxNami. hahaha

great job with this! *kisses*

Nice! Great job! Congratulations!

this was fan-fucking-tastic! :D
i particularly love how you portrayed the characters, and their relationship with each in the way and depth that i usually don't get to read in a lot fanfictions :)

First, ZONA IS MY ISHHHHH. Okay, so I really loved this. Didn't have lemons, but still very sweet and endearing. I appreciate the plot and the antithetic nature of the characters. Besides Zoro saying "sweetheart", I believed it (P.S. that's just me thinking of how I view Zoro). I think Luffy seemed hella mature in this story, which is nice and different, because at the end of the day, Luffy is a really complex character when it comes to his innocence yet his ideas of love and support for his friends and family are very evolved. I REALLY loved how Sanji wasn't this antagonist that needed to cope with Nami and Zoro, which is really refreshing because I agree with your writing in that he and the girls know his fawning is nothing serious (to the point of blocking other true love interests). Robin is always a fav, cause she is secretly cunning and wise...which is why I think of her and Franky as the ship's older, wiser couple. Another favorite thing...they WAY they said "I love you" without having said those words. Great. I think for this, it wouldn't be so clear cut and generic (in a sense), so that was great to see. Anyways, thanks for the superb read, hope to see more!

Great story so cute iloved it so much thank you

yusssss! love your fic perf ust wow im just so happy after reading this. thank you so much for writing a wonderful fanfic of one of the best couples around! much kudos x