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I LOVED IT! It was SOOOO amazing! It's been a while since I've read a klaine fic as good as this. Nd that's saying a lot considering I have no social life and a bunch if free time... Keep writing! You're awesome at it! Favoriting!

You evil you:-) :-) :-) ! Poor Blaine when he retutns to Dalton. And no,I can't imagine Blaine with a girl.

Nick's and Kurt's bonding over outfits for the date made me swoon!

For the record: Chris' biceps/arms are my kryptonite - I am a true blue Colferrette!

One of my all time favorite fics. 3

I LOVE this story it was so cute!

Aww... Yay! I love this so much. It's perfect and ends perfectly as well. :3

Je suis très bien parce que comme vous pouvez l'entendre, je peux parler maintenant.

Vous l'aimez quand je parle français ?

... Sorry, anyways, I love this chapter and the mind games that happened. I thought someone was going to hit Blaine. Kurt turning around saying 'You have a girlfriend!?' was awesome. :D Best ever. I love the ending and the way it ended. Yay for confessions, recreations, and kisses. :3

OMG! :D The date was so so perfect. I love Clarissa so much. :D *huggles* She is so awesome to Kurt and Blaine. :3 The chocolate cake sharing. :D Continuing onward to the next chapter...

This was very enjoyable. I don't usually like Klaine stories, cause I hate Blaine's character, but I really liked Kurt's sassy moments and the Warblers particulary Niff and Trent.

You know that it is not at all stalkerish to smell someone's blaser, buy it off the owner, search through the entirety of the school records... not stalkerish at all... awesome story though

Awwww... this story is adorable... absolutely so

I'm a bit disappointed actually. I think you missed a prime point of conflict.
Kurt lost his voice. One of the three self-proclaimed things that he's known for. But more importantly, he lost his voice after confronting Karofsky. And why did he confront Karofsky? Because BLAINE urged him not to be the victim. Blaine, in his visit to Dalton, encouraged Kurt to stand up to Karofsky and this is what happens, Kurt loses something that defines him.
If I were Kurt, I wouldn't just be sad and fearful. I would be furious. And not just furious at Karofsky, furious at everything. Kurt's whole life has to change now. He can't ever be on Broadway, like he'd always dreamed. He can't sing, his voice is physically (and to an extent metaphorically) silenced.
So as cute as all this is, I think its a miss. I think that the true conflict inside Kurt is partially his fear of Karofsky, but also the fact that he now has to figure out who he is all over again. Because he can't be Kurt the spunky countertenor any more.
To some extent, I also think that Kurt would be angry at Blaine. Blaine urged him to stand up for himself and confront the jock, and when he did he lost everything. A distraught and confused person, as Kurt is bound to be at this point, would very easily blame Blaine, almost as much as Karofsky. I think it would be very realistic for Kurt to want nothing to do with Blaine, to be avoiding him because Blaine is partially responsible ( in Kurt's mind) for Kurt's injury.
There should be so much more tension and drama in this story. Right now Kurt's acting like this is an old injury that he's already come to grips with, but it can't possibly be, based on the timeline of events. The fluff is all well and good, but if you really want to show the characters and to really MOVE people, then you need to show the raw feelings, the conflict and hurt. Fluff in small doses is fine. But four straight chapters of it (especially with Kurt in such a state) is too much and it detracts from the true struggles (and later victories) of the characters.
If you have any questions, feel free to pm me.
Cheers,
-Katerinaki

Wow...loved the entire story! Is there a possibility of a sequel?