Wow, this is great. More would be amazing

I just came across this story today and I love what you have so far. Please tell me this isn't abandoned!

Great to see you write on this story again love the chapter...

this is becoming a great story, update soon really good :)

Wooo bout time an update lol jks anyways great chapter and looking foward to reading more update again soon

really good start! updated soon please

That's what I call a powerfull beginning!

Please give us more soon.
Thanks!

Wow what a great first two chapters. You've set the scene really well. I liked how you had Grissom there at the beginning too. Update soon please!