This is pitch perfect

...I'm "definitely" excited, not ...I'm "defiantly" excited. Think of it as a phonetic spelling - de-fin-ite-ly, not de-fi-ant-ly. Defiant is doing something in a sort of rebellious manner or standing up for something, whereas definite is something certain to happen, etc.
This is an extremely common and annoying mistake that I see everywhere in people's written works, whether it be a (really good!) fan fiction or a student's essay.
-Canadensis

This is my 3rd time reading the FULL story. It's just that good. I hope you realize how beautifully timeless your stories are.

I really like the character development - with Percy stepping into his role as heir, and reaching a mutual understanding with everyone. I also think the ending is pretty cool. It's like they came full circle and reached a point where they can see the future. The overall message I found in the conclusion was that "life's good".

It's kind of comforting to see a nice ending when our own lives are filled with chaos and uncertainty (I have exams in three weeks that practically define my future. I hope that I can get accepted like Percy and Annabeth) . So thanks for writing this :)

MWAHAHAHAHAHA! I actually never thought about that. DEVIOUS!

This is great! Love it!

wait whoops noooo is what I ment

Nikki I just finished Reading

Thanks for the great story!

favourited because Percy n Jason is the brotp

Connor - stress relief and reality check in one. That's awesome.

"Piper and Annabeth were flying home the next day". It should say Percy not Piper. Fix it.

Omg it's been years since I've read fanfiction, but this is the first one I looked up bc I absolutely loved it It's a great story, with humor and romance and I probably commented all this bc I literally read it about 3 times

HAH CAMP HALF BLOOD! I SEE THE SYMBOLISM! YE!

I loved this story so much. I just want to read it ten times over. I LOVED IT!

I wish I was lucky enough to have friends like Percy...atleast one...