OMG...that was so awesome! The holodeck is haunted!

Wow! Your writing continues to just stun me. I was sitting in that holodeck on that bench right with Wesley and his dad. I could even hear the birds by the bay and smell the salt of the ocean. ( helps that I have been there once) but awesome chapter nonetheless.

LOVE IT. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

This has been a great story - thank you.

Lovely story. Enjoyed every minute of it. Keep writing more stories.

Excellent! I wondered at the time who had programmed Jack to know about the cricket but with everything else that happened to them I assumed it was an irrelevant detail. I'm glad I was wrong.

OK CHAPTERS 19& 20 WERE GREAT. KEEP UP. BUT PLEASE WRITE MORE GOOD STORIES. WHEN YOU HAVE THE TIME PLEASE.

While this was a terrific story, I really wanted to see what you would have done with him in his new role. Maybe there's a sequel? Please?

Love your writing and this story. Can't wait to see what happens.

Excellent. Really looking forward to Picard talking to Hannah and also Wesley talking to Beverly,

GETTING BETTER . KEEP IT UP.

Excellent - the white knight really is coming to Hannah's rescue!

GETTING GOOD KEEP UP.

OK GETTING BETTER . KEEP UP.

Excellent! I hope Picard goes to speak to Hannah now and gives her the option of staying on the Enterprise in his care. It would be a big adjustment for them both but I think they'd both benefit from it and also Hannah & Wesley would benefit from continuing their friendship.