Imagining Soos narrating himself making a sandwhich is one of the funniest things I have ever read.

This is a really, really, really great fanfic. Not only that the writer completed this and gave an above satisfactory ending, you can imagine Gravity Falls making an episode exactly like this fanfic. It captures all the characters' personality and behavior perfectly and like Gravity Falls I can't help but laugh at some parts because of it's very similar humor. Kudos to the writer, i love you

this was well written and I have loved this fanfic so far. just had to say the original chapter 15 is definitely better then the alternative. although both were well written and hilarious I have to say that the first fit more into the rest of it. It is amused that you would show more of Dipper and Pacifica because they are two of the main characters while Mabel is the only one in the other scenes. all that was needed to be shown was that Mabel and the gang were searching while you continued to progress the main plot. the ending where you finally show Dipper and Pacifica it felt forced and a little rushed and really didn't show the growth of their relationship. yes we saw in chapter 14 that they became close but we don't see how close until this one. (I also might be slightly biased in my opinion because I mostly just started reading this to satisfy my dipifica ship but stayed for the plot)

Well this was a weird read. It came out at the start of Season 1 GF but this was weird...
Nice fic, decent plot, ok characters and decent follow through.

Well this was a weird read. It came out at the start of Season 1 GF but this was weird...
Nice fic, decent plot, ok characters and decent follow through.

WTF was this chapter?

Damn just read this and your sequel stories and despite being a fan of the show from day one this is the first fan fiction I have read of gravity falls almost wish I hadn't you have ruined me for other stories I love your Pacifica she feels like the show version and I like that she doesn't get along with Mabel I really think that this is close to how it would go down for her and dipper thanks for the good time

Dipper congrats on getting your ass in some serious shit dude cause what you just pulled off is going to get kill your ass

Why didn't you put more on the first page of the story? But I don't think that I will be able to call this story bad because I am interested in your story!

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