Great story. I loved it. The worst ending ever. It ended to abruptly. There were too many unanswered questions and it would’ve been better off left abandoned than to just throw in a epilogue.

Well, like the emperor of China, the great Nasi Goreng said, it was to keep out the rabbits...
Sorry, you probably posted this story years ago, but I’ve only just found it.
Really interesting!

This was fantastic! And I love how you brought in the previous pack. Paul and Bella are my favorite, and now I can add your story to that list!

25. Epilgoue 2
then Seven kids later then Bitten with Mathew Charles Lahote Were all-Venomous then three drained with Best friends /two with Aliens/Vulcan ripped then mated had Kids phased then With others as all of Siblings then With Richard and Irene then then Both nuked both with the kids's with four thousands who turned you then Take them out at once then Head-Cord then Forbidden to mate then Executed from here then Lost too much many mostly more blood Slaughtered then Get her/him/army then you are charged with murder then screaming the of immortal children then Murdered by them t then Brutalized Violated killed both taken away from us/they then Nuked Brought there good rip these Lycans the Elders called both of the attack they were next dead dried out then too late Nothingness ten Atomized then good in time the damages was real the seer horrified of having eight kids was in a lot of pain then nuked with they Nothingness then began having headaches Shielding more powerful Alice what they done to you/him/as all of them never had more kids oh my god nuked Head-Cord brought there see Harbor Lycans with Venom bitten by alien rattlesnakes are Dead good with them Verdict to them Death rid of them with they with both with they then Killed by the Volturi forever with each both then Mixing blood with both then more Volturi guards then it was too late Never had more kids then Suddenly due to the Blood/Venom bond became Immortal still phasing so the kids were teenagers with they Alice they are undead as well blown us/they with they with around the world's supernatural as all of more than remains more monstrously but massive to more mazillions with three were aboard nuked freely then too late vanished in the lab good rip them alive then too late then skinned for coats as all of it then Aro we report a crime they are Shifters as all of them saved but rescued but kept under galactic guard but protected what you die for lies they are dead you are next Irina/others then killed then offically Murdered now it blown up then in time Henry and Marlene were Intimate cloistered then He Thrusted into her soon began officially but violently but began moving inside her then suddenly Moans of Marlene was heard covered were private then Deeply harder faster stronger powerful more Faster and swifter then She was Screaming in heat then far mostly more than Louder harder then More of it then suddenly herself was still more louder he officially but finally Released Semen/Sperm into her then the kissing more passionate deeply then Commander Strom Could not meditate or sleep he was grumbling of them Mating with as all of very far as all of the married But mating couples suddenly nuked with more were Atomized but vaporized now with others saved then in time Marlene's Mated scream was heard then was in his head so they in to due time she was Pregnant Henry was the father and sire then in time Had eight kids with the very as all of them as all of women then became mated couples with kids were children boo boos toys babysitters myself was witnessing Earth with him/they then it was inside the thing with more nuked atomized but vaporized then to Vulcan fusion then too late never aged but bodies into the lab dead good these as all of them they can't return to Earth then it really happened a new life for us/they stopped death still more phasing were Immortal by now marooned but stranded on the planet Vulcan never was human split from them lived in peace and serenity of Surak adopted robes e ate better meditated well rose in the mornings were icy cold but attained Kolinahr were now calmer beings became Nationals of the planet Vulcan then the Siblings arrived nuked with us/five thousands or more gone vanished from here good they are poisoned then toomlatre Lost from here forever.

I loved it! Was too into the story to stop and review, had to keep going to find out what happened lol.

Ignore the negative comments, I do. Your stories are great so far and I've been too engrossed in the story to write a review so far because it's that damn good. As far as happy pills lol you don't need them, true emotions create the best art, writing or otherwise. But I'm so digging this story! Of all the Bella wolf stories this is MY FAVORITE! So much is going on yet enough that it's satisfying and not too much to handle like most. I am curious if Leah will phase tho...

Holy crap so many questions! I don't even know where to start!

lol I have to admit she does indeed swear worse than Paul lol... I find it hilarious asf

Lol I like snarky spunky Bella lol

Right! Watching people sleep is creepy and Edward is a douche bag lol.

Yes! I love stories where Bella is a wolf! Excited to read this!

Why in hell don't they hung down the pack of werewolves during the day and take them out instead of hiding in their home like children?

It's Quil with one L.
Leah seems to be taking this better then Bella did,so far
I gather by the way Paul is acting she is knock up?

Will she ever get over herself and except her cage and move on?She is having a bigger pity party then Leah could even imagine.
When Leah phases I guess those two can have the biggest pity party the world has ever seen then they can move on get over themselves and live their lives.

Will Leah be also phasing so Bella won't be the line female in the pack?