Excuse my swearing but holy ducking shit that was a good two stories. I have never cried that much while reading a fanfic before in my life. I couldn’t tell if the latest chapter was the end or not. But if it isn’t. Could you please continue. I really do wanna see Blu and Jewel back together in the after life.

You are definitely a great writer. This story has left me in tears multiple times already. Keep writing

Sooo, "Basically", JEWEL is DEAD.

Will she come back

listen i am in love with this story and you can change that number to 7 im faving this just like i did for the first one and im telling you this story reminds me of myself im in his potion when he was depressed and i have not found that girl that bring me out of it as most have the power and love in them to do... i know im only one person but but this story gives me hope that this depression wont last forever and i hope you are still writing this story it is a great story... i hope you continue... fav story and fav author

Your writing skills are fantastic and your creativity is insane, this is a fantastic story and I do hope you continue it! I know it has been a long time, but you truly have something special here and I must read more! Haha thank you for creating such an art piece!

Great waiting for the it would be here soon.

Hey man, I apologize for such an extended delay for my review. Such a devoted follower such as myself should review as quickly as possible. But...we had FOUR tropical systems hit Vegas in a two week period, so I really couldn't go anywhere to get wi-fi.

Wow, Blu is making real progress with Annabelle. To think that at one point he was on the brink of suicide, and now he may have feelings of loving Annabelle is almost ludicrous. But for some reason, it feels...right. Sure, the void in his heart that Jewel filled will never be be filled, (sigh) and he will never see her again, but I feel that this could actually work for the both of them. I'm glad to see that Annabelle has what it takes to not only take care of herself, but tale care of someone whose heart was torn out. I only hope that this will continue, and that Blu won't have anymore heartbreak.

nice chapter..
can you plz update a lil faster?
I am DYING to read next.

hey first I'd like to apologize, as I've been reading and enjoying your stories and never left a single review so for that I'm sorry, but back to the story it's awesome! I'm not joking when I say your probably one of the best writers I've seen on fan fiction, especially Rio fan fiction there's barely anything I could criticise your work on so keep up the good work :D.

Sorry for the late review, I've been kinda busy and haven't been able to read as much...

First things first. It's good to hear from you again. I was kind of worried we'd never hear from you again...but it's all good because you at least let us know you're okay.

Now for the chapter...it was good. It seems they blu and anabelle have made excellent progress in their status as a couple. Blu seems to be adjusting and Anabelle seems to have moved on from her old 'friends'.

It was emotional, heartwarming, soothing piece of work. I thank you for this chapter.

Good to hear from you!

it is a great and sad story

Hey, I'm very sorry if I haven't reviewed, I rarely have time but for this story... You must continue it. I really like it because it's different from the other Blu/Jewel stories and I hope it's a happyend ine but who knows? You'll decide. Just that you mustn't stop right now when it's such a good story.

Awwww, /) 3 (\, this is such a sweet chapter, if only this was a movie, these two would look so adorable together, you did a very excellent job on this one, you deserve a vanilla ice cream, ... As soon as you give me back my vampire teeth, that be nice
I.T.S
( AKA mw3fan, mw4fan, blackops2fanatic)

I... um... I don't know what to say. Scratch that, I have a lot to say. You get the point.

The content and emotion in this chapter... it's overwhelming, and I mean that in the best way possible. I'm a total sop when it comes to romantic stuff, and this chapter was a straight-up overdose. I was stunned by the time I was done reading, and the end gave me some wicked chills. You blew me away with this update, and on top of that, you made my day three times over.

The wording was off a bit here and there and some of your sentences were run-ons. Also, you tend to put commas after some of the sentences and follow those up with dialogue. Either you don't like short sentences, or it's just a bad habit of yours. As long as a sentence has a subject and a predicate, it's grammatically correct. The length doesn't matter, so keep that in mind for your next chapter. I don't care about your errors in the sense that they didn't hinder my understanding of the content, but you should still do your best to eliminate them when you release the next part of this amazing work.

Aside from your relatively minor mistakes, this chapter was just deliciously perfect. Really, your declaration that you're rusty is totally false. This chapter could have been a little better grammar wise, but it's still superior to 99% of everything else on this subpar site. I sure hope you don't disagree. :D

Now that all the necessary and important stuff is out of the way, I'll end my review with a few more comments.

That Annabelle/Blu scene made me shudder. Placing myself in her shoes (feathers?) I could just imagine how, and I quote, erotic it must have been for her. Forget the good old butterflies she feels when she's around him; she's getting downright turned on, and that evokes strong feelings