Sucks do to being so dramatic

First off, you've been inactive, but I do really like this story and the premise. Sadly, the grammar is so damn irritating that it's incredibly hard to read. Typo's would be fine, but obviously English is not your primary language.

I'm sure in the years since this your English has gotten better. if it has, I'd LOVE to see a rewrite and you continuing this. I can almost guarantee that this could end up being one of the most highly rated Naruto Fanfics out there if the grammar was much better and you posted somewhat frequently.

Anyway, hope you haven't totally dropped writing. Grammar aside, you're much better than most on here.

So you say you make this a Mito x Tsunade x naruto pairing but Kuruma is flirting with Mito calling her a beauty with Mito constantly blushing so what are you trying to do

will you be adding furry?

Le gros problème de Tsunade est son apparence car oui elle est âgé de 50 ans mais physiquement elle fait entre 30 nb et 35 ans donc que quelques-uns de plus jeune, de la même génération que Naruto entre l'âge de konohamaru et 18 ans, est le béguin cela est normal et j'y adhère.

damnit. i hoped to read the next chapter. the story is great and really exciting.

Will you update

that was good keep the chapters coming

Is Kurama still connected to Naruto's soul that he wouldn't reform in the real world?

Sad this probally won't be updated, it's an interesting mix of Naruto darksiders and darksouls.

I say add in kushina.

I feel like killing people like involve unusual adult thing in you dont know how to write or think yourself many times and get realistic or dont write at story gives me freaks more than a story related to friday the 13th it will suit offense on suggestion.

Update soon

I like this, although it could stand to be edited and refined a bit.

This is pathetic