Reviews for Pure Perfection
Wolvie26 chapter 35 . 7/1
Love it! Hope there will be a sequel one day if there isn't already
nessiesmith2012 chapter 16 . 2/12
Welp bella went from becoming badass to angsty shy lame girl. Her behavior change is dramatic from the one you have set up so that a bit off putting especially as her reaction to unknown is worse then canon bella n i didnt even like her.
nessiesmith2012 chapter 5 . 2/12
Wait bella got the 'cure' so she is back to being powerless? I hope not a smart power bella was what i was hoping for.
Kushka chapter 35 . 8/25/2019
Great story
henry.john.downey chapter 17 . 12/10/2018
A good story up until this point, the chapter seems to rush romance between Bella and Edward, too much for me to consider it a real relationship. On top of this Edwards sudden ability to stand Bella's scent in spite of barely being accustomed to it reads as author BS.
Aeonmaster Aeroza chapter 35 . 6/10/2018
I thought this story was truly amazing, it would be a shame if you didn’t continue this as a Avengers Crossover; If I can rate this (Which I can’t officially), I give it a 5/5 Fan Fic Stars.
vampirelady13 chapter 20 . 11/9/2017
God chapter.
vampirelady13 chapter 19 . 11/9/2017
So this is were Charlie gets pretty much reduced t o nothing in he story. H his p art raised Bella now he is going to get kicked to the curb. Fullness come into the story and Charlie gets one line. He also gets to loose Bella when Wolverines f I ends her. Poor Charlie got set up to loose everything
vampirelady13 chapter 17 . 11/9/2017
So she has never felt content with Charlie. I also think Charlie won't be in this story much from this point on.
vampirelady13 chapter 11 . 11/8/2017
I really l y do not like Jean I want to slap the carp out of her. Poor Wolverine that witch broke him. I don't think she even deserves Bella and I hope she does not come back. She is horrible.
vampirelady13 chapter 10 . 11/8/2017
I thought this was a good chapter. Thank you
vampirelady13 chapter 9 . 11/8/2017
Loved it. Thank you
vampirelady13 chapter 8 . 11/8/2017
Renee is horrible but I have never really liked her. Good chapter thank you. First chapters are for setting up the story so of course there going to be a little slow. You are doing an awesome job. Thank you
vampirelady13 chapter 7 . 11/8/2017
Good job I am glad the Bella still has her powers. I am the one who just reviewed chapter five sorry I did not realize I was not logged in. I am a real big fan of Charlie. Thank you for writing Charlie as a good man. Thank you
Guest chapter 5 . 11/8/2017
I also love Charlie and am so glad that I am not the only one. I to have read many story's were Charlie is the bad guy. There always seems to be more bad Charlie than good Charlie story's. So thank you for writing a good Charlie story. You are doing good loving story so far. Thank you
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