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Guest chapter 22 . 10/23/2019 Plot was good but the whole 'everyone drop into submissive poses because neither one of us can control our insticts/gifts/or mouths' in damn near every chapter is a little ridiculous. Not to mention Angela's going from cowering in a corner from trauma to being a sex starved freak in the sheets, again is a bit of a stretch. Also the switching points of view without even a hint to who's it is is really annoying. I also never really understood the need to give Jasper multiple personalities, yeah he went through shit in the south but I feel the vampire brain is fully capable of dealing with said trauma. Multiple personalities develop when the human brain can't handle trauma being done to them and it's very rare. Giving him multiple personalities makes him seem so weak. |
AliceCullen0629 chapter 39 . 8/17/2019 good story |
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Kushka chapter 39 . 6/7/2019 Good story |
Dreamcreaters chapter 1 . 7/31/2018 A fucking amazing story |
Kushka chapter 39 . 5/8/2018 Good story |
Missysue32 chapter 39 . 3/21/2018 I so, so, so Loved this Awesome Story of yours! |
Missysue32 chapter 19 . 3/20/2018 WOW! THAT’S ALL I CAN SAY IS WOW! |
Missysue32 chapter 18 . 3/20/2018 I absolutely loved this awesome chapter! I can’t wait to read more! |
Kushka chapter 39 . 8/24/2017 Good story |
TinaF chapter 39 . 11/18/2016 Amazing story! Thank you for sharing. |
keraatchley679 chapter 8 . 9/15/2016 Bella is an amazing vampire! |
keraatchley679 chapter 7 . 9/15/2016 Amazing chapter! Loved it! |
keraatchley679 chapter 6 . 9/15/2016 Excellent! |
keraatchley679 chapter 5 . 9/15/2016 Fantastic! |