I agree with mammoth, magic sucks and is a cheating bastard, when its used against you! if otherwise...then its the next best thing since sliced bread!

Nice story. I can't wait for more.

Awesome. Would love to see more! :)

niice

Nice I rather like how everyone was checked and I wonder what the cause of all these mental curses was.
I wonder if this is the reason why Mammoth is so dimwitted, along with Gizmo's less than pleasant mannor.
Could some of these curse by created by Brother Blood or an agent of the Academy under his orders to insure his "students" (future army/ minions) had to relay on him and did not try to take over. After all hundreds of mind being controlled over a long period would be a challenge even for the greatest of mentalists. Reducing or modifying there mental process would make them easier to control. So what if it makes them cannon fiddle at times to the Titans. I get the feeling that he had this done before the Titans arrived anyway.

Two major typo's I can't overlook
first: SORECERER well... You obviously meant sorcerer.
second:
quiet silence
quit stop doing it
quite
adverb
1.
completely, wholly, or entirely:
quite the reverse; not quite finished.
2.
actually, really, or truly:
quite a sudden change.
3.
to a considerable extent or degree:
quite small; quite objectionable.

Aside from these typos, its an awesome story :) and I have no further comments to give.

Its kind of sad you didn't make this into an actual story. It might have been interesting to read.

This should be a full story not a one and done dud.

Pretty cool.

please update

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i love it

Huh weird, interesting but the end somewhat confusing.

Interesting start