Great story. You're right bout the Nevermore thing. :)

You have awesome stories -blah, blah, blah... I gave you a damn review for your awesomeness and greatness and wonderful writing skills... [YAWN]...

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Two of my all time favorite books are When the Wind Blows and The Lake House. I had no idea that James Patterson put out a series with some of my most beloved characters. I don't know this series and I don't know how different this is from his other books, but I like the attitude you gave Max. It fits her very well and reminds me of the feisty mouth I remember from her. There are a few thoughts that should be in quotes so people can immediately notice the difference, but overall this was cute. Good job!

I loved it! I wish u would add more so that it wasn't a cliff-hanger. Maybe do a whole story or something. It was really good I like how u bases it off of nevermore! That was really smart. AWESOME JOB! :)

I don't like Eggy but OK. Loved it!

Amazing! That totally should've been in the book!

:D. Way better than crappy nevermore

Yay! I'm the first person to review! (I think). Anyway, that was really good. I do agree with you about Nevermore, it pretty much sucked.
Hope you write more MR :)
Peace!