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Guest chapter 24 . 2/5 I don't care,this is now cannon |
VLeiaJediKnight chapter 24 . 11/5/2019 I know you said you get a lot of flames but from a story stand point this was beautiful. It's a long time since this has been updated but it's still being read! |
Lara Schulz chapter 7 . 4/9/2019 i like this story very match but as a native german i must tell you that some of the the germann was incorrekt. i know nobody likes know it alls but first of all "gelübte" dosnt fit in the sentens it should be verspreche in the next german sentence you shoul say "Wenn sie versprechen unsere Stadt zu retten werden wir cooperien." steve should answer "Ich verspreche ich werde helfen ihre stadt zu retten. Ich will ihr zu hause retten." Just a tip. zhe rest is correct. What you wrote was jibberisch at first glance and then afterr rereding it sounds like you want to save somting on your pc its pretty funny as natasha tells us what it is supost to mean. |
AraneltheSilvan chapter 24 . 4/7/2019 Aww please continue. ;) |
Hero Of The Hazard chapter 4 . 3/21/2019 What's really sweet is Tony immediately noting Steve's birthday right when he hears it, with no other intention other than celebrating his birthday. The bond is great. (Which makes Civil War hurt even more, dammit.) |
TheDamCow chapter 22 . 3/6/2019 Tony is me in the morning |
Trekkiehood chapter 24 . 7/8/2018 Loved this soooooo much! Thanks for this awesome fic! |
Ghost Wolf 114 chapter 24 . 1/6/2018 so wait.. this chapter doesn't make sense to me. Bucky isn't the winter soldier? Bucky was brainwashed by Hydra, but if he is here talking about steve does that mean that bucky died in the end and never met Steve in the future? I can't say I like that idea very much. Your story is great but I just don't agree on this chapter. Bucky plays a major role for steve. Bucky helps steve cope with being in the future. Bucky is the only one of Steve's friends who aren't in the hospital or dead. Bucky also helps him during the civil war. -_- I'm sorry but I really don't agree on this |
Guest chapter 8 . 12/25/2017 Go Texans! Also it’s reallh good! |
MS chapter 24 . 12/18/2017 So did Bucky not fall off the train in this story? |
Guest chapter 24 . 10/5/2017 This story made me cry uncontrollably. I loved it. Great job! Your have done all these characters proud. |
Writer of Fire chapter 8 . 1/3/2017 Oops. Found an error. "I don't believe she said "last week"." My bad. ' |
Writer of Fire chapter 7 . 1/3/2017 You know, I love your story, but your german is breaking my heart. So I'll give you the proper translation. Bitte beruhigen Sie sich. Wir versuchen Ihnen zu helfen. - Please calm down everyone. We are trying to help. Dann bleiben wir und verteidigen unser Zuhause. - Then wenn stay and defent our home. Wir sagen Ihnen, wann es sicher ist, zu Ihren Häusern zurückzukehren. Für jetzt müssen Sie hier übernachten. - We'll tell you when you can reteurn to your home. But for now you have to stay here. Warum sollten wir euch Amerikanern vertrauen?! - Why should we trust you American. Sie haben die Wahl ob Sie mir vertrauen. Sie können mir vertrauen und ich verspreche, ich kann Ihnen helfen. - You have the choice if you want to. You can trust me and I vow I can help. Wenn Sie unser Zuhause retten, werden wir kooperieren. - If you save our home, we will cooperate. Ich verspreche es. Ich werde Euer Zuhause retten. - I promise that I will. I will save your home. Danke, das du uns hilfst. - Thank you for helping us. Ich bin froh, das ich helfen konnte. - I'm glad I could help. And I would appreciate it, if you could tell me what Natasha realy said. I don't believe shenanigans said "last week". Ich hope you will correct your mistakes in the german sentences because THEY ARE HURTING ME! Please. |
Samantha2611 chapter 11 . 9/24/2016 Whoever gave you flames is an idiot, an utter moron. This is amazing. :D |
Guest chapter 24 . 8/24/2016 Thank you for writing this it made me tear up way to much but I loved it |