Reviews for Organized Lightning
LOCISVU chapter 17 . 9/12/2013
Oh have your own strength.
LOCISVU chapter 16 . 9/12/2013
That didn't sound good.
UndeadJanet chapter 17 . 9/11/2013
AHHHHH. I LOVE THIS. UPDATE AGAIN SOOOOOON PLEASEE.
goddragonking chapter 17 . 9/11/2013
great ch and hope for more updates
Guest chapter 16 . 8/20/2013
So glad you updated-
Guest chapter 16 . 8/17/2013
Hot
goddragonking chapter 16 . 8/17/2013
great ch and hope for more updates
jay357 chapter 10 . 6/23/2013
How can this be so hot and so romantic at the same time?! WONDERFUL 3
jay357 chapter 9 . 6/23/2013
I love this story so much 3
I can't even tell you how much I want them to just be happy at this point :3

Tiny sidenote: Hanzel and Gretyl are a band. The characters from the fairytale are called Hansel and Gretel :)
jay357 chapter 5 . 6/22/2013
So far I really love this story, and I know I'll keep on reading it, because your writing is fantastic and the storyline is wonderful.

One thing, though. To be honest there was something in this chapter that really put me off.
"(which, who were they fooling, neither would risk the carbs)"
Neither Regina nor Emma have shown any tendency to restrict their food comsumption on the series, and I must honestly say when authors write about Regina ordering salad all the time, that bothers me. Here it was mainly the sentence in brackets. I just believe it's not who the characters are. Regina, who's into apple turnover and lasagna, Emma, who's into hot chocolate with lots of whipped cream and so forth, you know?
LOCISVU chapter 15 . 5/27/2013
Cora was just a ghost?
Korderoo chapter 15 . 5/26/2013
Yeah mind-reading might be the worst thing for a couple. I can't wait to read more. Thank you!
fussyviolet chapter 15 . 5/25/2013
Love this story. Rich, complex and completely yummy.
LOCISVU chapter 14 . 2/9/2013
Oh seems to be coming back.
Korderoo chapter 14 . 2/9/2013
Wow, crap! I just found this and read it all today but I'm fully hooked! Can't wait for more! Thank you!
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