| Reviews for Noticing Melinda |
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  Z6pAN chapter 1 . 9/2/2018 Veri n1c3ewgst0riQp |
 inki is dear evan hansen trash chapter 13 . 1/15/2018 IM DYING OML ITS BEAUTIFUL |
| inki is dear evan hansen trash chapter 11 . 1/15/2018 Aww! |
| inki is dear evan hansen trash chapter 7 . 1/15/2018 ALEXANDER HAMILTON |
| inki is dear evan hansen trash chapter 4 . 1/15/2018 .Gosh David I couldn't stop laughing when I read this BEAUTIFUL! *kisses computer screen* |
| inki is dear evan hansen trash chapter 3 . 1/15/2018 IM FANGIRLING SO MUCH RIGHT NOW! MelindaXDavid! |
| inki is dear evan hansen trash chapter 2 . 1/15/2018 I love the dialogue, btw It's just like it is in the book! :D |
| inki is dear evan hansen trash chapter 1 . 1/15/2018 I laughed so hard at that last part XD Oh, David |
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/19/2017 Hey I'm like five years late but I just got this book today and it was fantastic so like five minutes later I found this fic and wow you've got the style and story down pat congrats I loved his thought bits and It was so sweet so I know you probs won't read this but love your work! Bye Ps when I create an account this is going on my favorites |
| Masi13 chapter 13 . 2/15/2017 This is soooo adorkable I think I'm about to throw up sugar, spice, and everything nice. I like this ending better than the book a bit... BTW this comment is a compliment. |
| Arishya Aggarwal chapter 13 . 10/23/2016 I think you did an absolutely wonderful job creating this. It made me feel the exact same emotions that David was feeling. You should make more chapters of the challenges/struggles the young couple go through every day and Melinda faces struggles as growing up a girl in high school. I really want this to continue because I enjoyed reading this. |
| findingthesunlight chapter 13 . 10/2/2016 too sweet! i don’t know why, but i love that you used Speak's format. the story is cheesy, and i like it today. reading the sequel right now. xx / faves though. |
| Gsean20 chapter 1 . 2/21/2016 Hi! I like your chapter a lot and would love to see you write more. One thing I noticed was that David uses the same nickname for the teachers that Melinda does. I think it would be fascinating if you created a set of "Davidisms" to use to better capture David's voice. Like would David have his own internal nicknames for teachers around him and even the other students? I think seeing those would be really cool. Overall, really good! It'd would be great to see you write more from David's point of view. |
| davepetrakislovr chapter 1 . 11/12/2015 10/10 would read again! love this SO MUCH |
| kanziiii chapter 1 . 10/22/2015 For a fanfic its pretty good. You should definitely write more. P. petrakis fall in love with sordino:) |
