| Reviews for Determination |
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Guest chapter 11 . 6/15 U stoped it...*me giving u a very intense death glare* |
Bird chapter 11 . 5/25/2018 I love this. Your OCs are great and I love how you fit it into the canon without downright contradicting it. Good job. |
juliet chapter 6 . 10/5/2013 ooooooooh! my birthday is in january! i have curly blonde hair and bluish-gray eyes! ( i wish i could be annabeth!) i might be able to meet rick riordan this coming wednesday in new york city! |
I am that Writer chapter 11 . 2/28/2013 Yeah! Let’s get this show on the road! Next chapter soon, please! (I also can’t wait for the Robalie romance, and Emma’s backstory. Nice beta-reading, SerendipityInSerendipity, by the way!) |
Guest chapter 11 . 12/3/2012 Keep writing! Amazing story! THESNEAKYNINJA |
Guest chapter 10 . 12/3/2012 Emma doesn't neccessarily have no parent. Percy has Sally. Annabeth has her dad. Maybe Emma just didn't get along with her step-parent, or left to protect her non-demigod siblings. |
Guest chapter 6 . 12/3/2012 Robalie defenitely sounds best. Natabert sounds like a large yellow bird on steroids, and Ronat sounds like some kind of mutant sneeze. Just saying. Same guest just below, or, THESNEAKYNINJA |
Guest chapter 4 . 12/3/2012 Love the story! It has started out great! Comment on the art: I'm an artist and though I'm a thirteen year old girl, I know that lots of people do not take critism kindly. The following is a light critism on your artwork, as an artist. If you do not appreciate critism, then ignore the following. The eyes and hair look great! However, the eyebrows are pointed downward so much that she looks more angry than determined. However, I think that the angry look kind of goes with the determination thing. So maybe I'm just crazy... Cheers! |
Lady Spectrum chapter 11 . 11/15/2012 Alright! This is great! Waiting eagerly for the next chapter to find out what comes next! UPDATE SOON PLEASE! |
Permanently Inactive chapter 11 . 11/11/2012 Sorry about not reviewing in so long but I've been really busy. Great Chapter. |
raisa864 chapter 11 . 11/5/2012 Awesome! Flawless grammar! You are really developing the story and plot rather smoothly! UPDATE ASAP! |
raisa864 chapter 8 . 11/5/2012 I applaud this chapter! It's amazing! The sense of hope you give Nat is so inspirational! |
raisa864 chapter 7 . 11/5/2012 NO KENNY! DON'T GO! I WILL NOT ALLOW IT! |
raisa864 chapter 6 . 11/5/2012 Wow, this is great! I really like how Robert and Nat are slowly coming closer! Their backgrounds are original as well as creative! I'm expecting great things! |
raisa864 chapter 5 . 11/4/2012 Kenny is officially awesome on my book... YOU ARE DOING AN AMAZING JOB! |