Excited to read the rest of this, it was so hard for me to find a good story, but this seems really really awesome and well written.

Hem hem my a** no one deserves her I rather take Voldemort head on in battle

I'm sorry I haven't left a comment/review before. this story is very good. I've never read one like this where Hermione is more actively fighting Voldemort. I like it quite a bit. I will say that you probably should try to get a Beta, though. I've noticed that you frequently have fragments of sentences either missing or randomly inserted. I know its from your own editing and I can see where your thought was going and what you decided on. But it does distract me as a reader for a moment every time it happens. Also I've noticed that sometimes you slip between narratives... 1st and 3rd. Not frequently but a couple times. Also, you're missing some commas here and there. I wouldn't say I'm a punctuation expert, but you are missing some.
Don't forget to "show, don't tell." When Draco suspects Snape is gay, don't outright tell the reader that Draco thinks he's gay. Dance around it and let the reader come to the conclusion that "oh, it seems like Draco thinks Snape is gay." That's just one example that was earlier on. Seems like you did more of that earlier rather than these "later" chapters.
Last but not least, you're missing some fluff. Things like Christmas presents. What did Draco give her? Did she give anything to any of the Malfoys? What did her parents give her? Ginny didn't give her anything? How did she feel missing xmas with her parents? With the Weasley's? Okay, but other than xmas, the Gringotts takeover was never explained. How did Draco do it? There were other times you kind of flounced over a topic that left me with questions but I can't think of them all. None of them were imperative for the plot, but I noticed those kinds of details missing. You seem to want to stick to things that only further the plot but it's the fluff that immersed the reader into the story and makes it feel real.
I hope I don't come across harsh. I know taking criticism is Not easy. But you have a really good storyline here and you might be losing some readers (not me) with some of these mistakes. These things are totally 100% things a Beta would catch for you. Writing is hard AF and published writers have a slew of people going over their works. This story is great. But it could be fantastic. Give your baby (this story) the chance to be amazing. She deserves a Beta.
Great work. And if you don't mind... I'm going to binge-read some more when I should really have gone to bed over an hour ago. So take comfort in knowing I'll be going back to work tomorrow (after a week off, no less) with much less sleep than I should be because of you. Ghah! *shakes fist*

I'm so glad that I happened upon this story! I truly loved it from start to finish and Draco proved that his family really is the most important to him! I liked the dark Hermione parts because you don't normally get to see that side of her. Really great job!

this story is truly beautiful and different from the other marriage law fics i've read. you did a good job! this honestly became one of my favorite dramione fics ever and i am grateful that you wrote this.

Nice ending! I'm so glad they got rid of the potion that breaks the vow.

Omg! amazing storyline. i liked the little comment at the end about ron!

thank you so much I'm totally tearing up now

I absolutely adore this story. I can't believe, I haven't stumbled upon it before. I will definitely be returning for a re-read later.

Thanks for posting!

Wow.

So I wanted to start this off with saying that I had noticed the “Marriage Law” idea was a pretty common idea within this fandom, however I had never really given it much thought. Truth be told, I kinda figured that I would read a few chapters, grow bored and move on. However, I have just finished the last chapter and I must say that I am thoroughly impressed. This story was phenomenal! The flow of the story drew me in and kept me captivated. I loved the added touch of the “Next Time” I think that, honestly made me all the more interested. This story was well thought out and I enjoyed it from start to finished.

Okay so I have been sucked into this story completely! I am so glad hermione is finally showing a bit of common sense and coming around! I absolutely love how Draco immediately put her and the baby first and even offered to go to the order for help.

Ok so I just stumbled across this fic today and started it. apologies for not updating at each chapter, so far, but I've been much to wrapped up in finding f out what happens next. this is a great fic so far and I'm looking forward to seeing it unfold!

Great ending. I really enjoyed this!

Oh. That's so cute.

Beautiful story and lovely ending...