| Reviews for After Hours: Untouchables |
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  Strawberry Mica chapter 7 . 12/4/2013 Amazing story i love it |
 PandaHat97 chapter 7 . 6/23/2013 This story was freakin awsome. But i cant help to think that a sequel would be better. Like light meets him again years later but light doesn't remember him. And not only that but he is also kira. Or something like that. That would be epic. Just a suggestion though. |
| A Young Hedonist chapter 7 . 6/6/2013 This story is fucking awesome! |
| UltimateNinjaOfDoom chapter 7 . 11/24/2012 that was an awesome story i loved it lots |
| Fluoxetine chapter 1 . 10/3/2012 I like it so far, though you made a funny typo - it should be "cork board", not "cock board". XD |
| FireAndPowder chapter 7 . 9/24/2012 loved the ending lol |
| Kida Linh chapter 7 . 9/5/2012 Ominous ending... |
| StarRice chapter 7 . 8/29/2012 I really love this story, I imagine it as a "Before Death Note" story. It didn't drag on, got what it wanted to do done. Light was a bit naive but then again he was 16, so it fit. And I might be mistaken but was there an underlying romance in some scenes of this? Between L "Deneuve" and Light? Also, for some reason with the ending, I think maybe "FIN" would would better here for some reason. The tone maybe. |
