Reviews for The World's Treasure Part 1: The Rainbow
Orangen chapter 44 . 8/25/2019
Hey! I know this fic is long done, but I figured I'd still come by and say that I finally got around to catching up on this, and it was definitely worth coming back to. Particularly, Relatia's a wonderful character in general, and I loved all of her scenes, haha. The full legend of her people is also pretty interesting, and it's nice to see that Laura gets to stay with all of her friends, too. I'm kind of interested in whether or not she could travel back and forth, since Relatia can, but I suppose that's a question best saved for the sequel if you get time to finish it. Anyway, it was definitely satisfying to see how this ended, and I hope you get the time to work on Part 2!
Meowman chapter 44 . 10/8/2016
You haven't been doing anything for a year. Is something happening?
S chapter 44 . 9/20/2016
Quick question, is the melody that Regalia's husband created and the one she was humming happen to be Oracion?
Diamondera chapter 44 . 8/21/2015
This is a wonderfully made story and I'm surprised that it is not more widely known. I hope to be able to read some of part two in the near future.
phantom chapter 43 . 2/10/2015
I would just like to say that I think that was a great ending for part one and I am looking forward to the second part. I hope it comes out soon :)
Wish counselor chapter 39 . 3/22/2014
While I'm enjoying the anticipation on what will happen to the spirit trio (get ready for a fate worse than death. They will lost their title as said legendaries of said emotions for good. Maybe for a couple decades at least.), on Laura's scene, my reaction is "AAWWWWW HELL NNNOOOOOOOOO!"

Really, the yellow light again?! NOT AGAIN! It's just saying that Yveltal and Xerneas must talk once more to each other again.

And wow, the essence of aura is like an ID. Relatia is access denied says time gears, sigh sad. Really, does that mean aura can be used as keys to just about anything? With aura, maybe we can give our phones 100% security and still be able to find the thief who stole it if it happens
Guest chapter 37 . 1/16/2014
Thank you for updating. I hope you plan to continue the series and update more often. :)
Wish counselor chapter 37 . 1/17/2014
Ohhhhh man. Now that the mother is here, please tell everyone that is needed to be done. Don't you know the results of what you did to your children? Right now, I'm scared on being the spirit trio's view cause facing a furious mother GODDESS is asking to die at her wrath. Never a good sign. Eye socket removal?

Arceus has A LOT of talking to do to Relatia after this dillemma
MewFanGirl chapter 37 . 1/14/2014
Oh my gosh! I was laughing SO hard at how long it took for the guild to realize the rainbow/golden child thingys and when Relatia popped up! O Nice.

I might think about re-wording one thing though: "... he might was harboring..." It's... kinda worded weird... Ya know?
Broken Alice chapter 36 . 8/24/2013
Laura's the Rainbow Child, much beloved by all legendaries. I like this version of the Time Gears legends.
Wish counselor chapter 36 . 8/19/2013
I'm almost speechless after reading the legend. Overall, this could have been an official cannon if ever possible. Gosh. Zubat's mutual crush is one thing. But this, ... I love your folklore/legendary story.
Whatwasthatnoise chapter 36 . 8/19/2013
Uuuh, question; Where's Arceus with all this going on? Still hiding himself in the Hall of Origin/Destiny Tower? Seeing as he's the Pokemon Universe's equivalent of God after all...
Acilla chapter 35 . 6/7/2013
To lazy to log on Acilla IS my username lazy. Chapter 34 had me going especially when relatia's seal or barrier of darkness I guess was broken im really anxious to see chapter 36! Keep up the work please cause I LOVE to read this story :) its the best pokemon mystery dungeon story ive ever read x3
WyldClaw chapter 14 . 6/5/2013
why did mason kidnap laura?
Wish counselor chapter 34 . 5/29/2013
When you started that scene with the Spirit Trio entering the Guild, everyone (most, not all) is angry at them. I mean, if your celebi had higher Big brother Instinct akin to that of a Knight Templar, he WILL he ripping their bodies like on that Classic movie Psycho. Or do something deadly to them, specifically Uxie, like how Slenderman killed you in Slendy's games. And now, I give now my replies and verdicts to the Spirit Trio.

Mesprit - I can forgive you this time since you DO act motherly to her during your "MISSION". You are now suffering an ultimate Emotional Breakdown that just results in your huge loss of rationality and insanity. May end up becoming permanently insane if left untreated. Makes me feel that I can forgive you since you finally realized the price of it all ... justifingly. You are ... NOT ... GUILTY!

Azelf - sounds like you are torn between your siblings. I see that you had the least tears of them all since you finally accepted the crime you did to Laura and Mason. Had YOU killed her though, you would end up facing Mason's anger similar to Uxie's. Don't worry, cry it out that you're guilty since suppressing it will make it worse for you. You are ... NOT ... GUILTY!

Uxie - Despite the crime you did and the revolt that everyone in the Guild exaggerated to you, your reasons are clearly justified for a greater good. Like I said before, it is too late to regain the trust of everyone who knew you. You will have to start all over again, especially to Mason. Be thankful that Laura understands you, just be honest and tell the whole thing (which you should have done before with Mason's permission): even if it will result with Laura's overprotective brother killing you in the process. As for the consequences of your actions though, I would say that Relatia will punish you ... in her terms. Something that will haunt the rest of your days living.

Anyways, *GASP*, the statues are ALIVE! THE STATUES ARE ALIVE! Horrors ensue! What will happen next?! And anyways, poor Loudred. I officially call you Loudred the pervert. It's just fun to do s to him. I mean, we hate him so much that his flaws make him so fun to mock with.
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