Shonnel and her mom are the pitts! Grrrr! I hope Lance finally stands up for San and shuts those two women down! (not now of course, but later on in the story). in the meantime, i'm still loving whats been going on thus far! Glad her papi got enraged at San's ma not believing that Juliette pushed her down the steps.

Oh fuckin hell.. You got me all pissed.. I really hate them bitches that are being bitches to my baby... But, I dont know, theres something with this story that makes me wanna know more, that makes me wanna keep reading.. Oh well, im fine with that. But, heads up, theres probably gonna be some swearing cos of them stupid bitches. Sorry... But anyways, this seems like a real cool story.. Well.. Yea.. Good job, mate ;)

Wow, I really enjoyed that a lot. It's obvious you have a flare for writing. I love your style and I'm interested in seeing where you take this. Really great!

extremely intrigued by the story and moved by your intention and purpose of writing

Great start!

I love where you're going with this story! You didn't just jump right in with san meeting quinn and instantly falling in love. You're taking your time which is awesome! You've allowed a background and foundation to build, i'm def ready for more!

Wow this first chapter was amazing! I love the characters in this and the basic storyline that is shown :) I can't wait to read more!

Interesting, new idea. I like it, and that's all I'm going to say now because I would rather see more before giving any critics. So keep it up.

Nice first chapter! I just can get my head around an heterosexual Santana.