for yullen fans i bet this was what in our heads for this whole arc hahahha

Omg I love this so much! Your writing, the characters' description, the plot,... everything gives me so much feelings! Thank you so much for this!

I looove the end. According to me, it's a happy ending, even if ends are the saddest part, as said Mr Silverstein.
Thanks for this, kisss
A;

GASP! Please make MOOoOrE! MoOOoOOOoOoOrrREEre!haha, please update this soon!

I know it says one shot...
But I wish it would continue. XD

omg! so far best story made in dgm 3

This was saddening.

Interesting. I'm glad you made reference to the random folks hitting on/groping Kanda in the manga, thinking he was a girl. Those had me laughing out loud as I read the manga. :D

I wondered, however, why you changed how things went as compared to the manga (except for how the transformation was going down). Any particular reason? I loved your ending, though. Kinda came out of nowhere but that was why it was so charming, I think. I can't help thinking that feeding method would be a good way for Kanda to calm the Bean Sprout down. XD

uaaah so awesome! i loveee this!

YEAHHHHH. go Kanda! xD
WINNER lol.
i love te story! i like the non-polite-ness of allen! really shows he was with Cross! haha

Oh Kanda, you are so inventive. Force-feeding by kissing; that's pretty genius. I feel bad for Allen though, he was probably wigging out in his head. Poor thing.

sayo-chan

That was so cute and still, so deep. You did a wonderful job with Kanda and Allen!
I bet that was Allen's fisrt kiss too u.u

I really enjoyed reading this. I liked seeing the different perspectives to the events in the manga. It was an understandingly sad read but the ending was really fun. :)

ALS

Its actually really good :) I love the drama and the ending, and you make me wonder what will happen next

aww so sad but sweet at the same time cant wait for an update!