O.O (Wants to hug Fubuki)

OML I LOVE THIS ONE SHOT. I WOULD DIE IF THIS EXTENDED INTO OTHER CHAPTERS

In love with this one-shot too...big fan of the angsty ending! Good job!

Keerthana

Lolz. hahah. it was cool!

I really liked your story because you gave full detail and a lot of specification. Keep it up Write more GouFubu! :D You're nailing it so much :3 (FLUFF THIS TIME FLUFF)

That was absolute amazing! You should write more goufubu awesome-ness!

What does OOC mean? Laugh at me all you want. I'm seriously blurr here. Provided being seven in the morning.
Ah well straight to the point; GouFubu story, huh? Interesting. Keep it up and good luck on your next stories!

Urgh, phone typed reviews. I always hit the post button by mistake. What I wanted to say was te comparison with Yukimura added a very nice touch to the fic. Showing the Fifth's Sector's influence was extremely well done in that section. Great job!

Also, I adore how you left the name Ishido to the very end, it ended the fic with a bang, plus it rounds off the fic well as you started with the name Gouenji.

Welcome to the site! I look forward to new fics soon! :D

... Breathtaking.

I'm utterly serious, that is some AMAZING vocab there. The emotions are weaved in the words you use, the descriptions just blew me away. I adored how Fubuki is just called 'you' throughout the entire story, it gives a mystical feel to it. Every single detail of Gouenji's appearence impressed me so much. I especially love the piercing story. It's so realistic, touching on Fubuki's teasing. Even the ear ring being a silver lightning bolt adds foundation and makes the fic very solid.

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Wooooow, .Amazing!
I don't know what words could describe! Just, truly amazing!
And seeing this is your first fic..? Welcome to FFN!

Anyways, Great work! ((Oh, look. it's Miyu-san's art fufufufu.))
Hope to see more soon, Byaa

That was ... amazing.
So well written.
I felt the passion in your story.
Gosh, it made me fell silent.
xoxo Mamera