This is an all-time favorite of mine. I love getting into Chase's head, which you write very well. But honestly, leave it to Chase and Jack to do everything backwards.

I've read most of your other fics and I absolutely love all your little challenges and prompts with these two characters. Thank you so much for taking the time to write. (Also, side-note, the scene from the Crayola prompts "Coconut" was priceless; I couldn't breathe from laughing so hard.)

Great story!

Awwwww! So sweet! I can’t wait to see what you write next!

Mm-hmm. Don't think I didn't see you slide that Static Shock referance in there Ms. Sky. Very nice

this story was awesome

fuck, everything was so cute...sososososoo cute. great job!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA! I loved this! my favorite part was the icecream! you have a wonderful writing style and I encourage you to write more stories!

You really are the best Chack author at . Hands down. And you only get better, your ideas are always fresh and fun to read and reread.

This was so freaking cute it was unbelievable. I loved it and I think you did a great job with it.

I've been trying to read through all of your stories lately, it's taking a while.
Anyway...
Ohmygod that was so sweet and great and awesome and beautiful and you even threw in reference to static shock!

I have no words to say how amazing this story is. By far one of the best Chack I've ever read. Perfect and lovely story! Great job.

This was a lovely story! I want to read it again!

I love this story, first i was reading it and i was like ''eh'' BUT as i read more i was like ''awww and ohhhh.''
All in all, well written, this story is epic.

This is a pretty unique way to start off a chase and Jack couple, and it feels pretty organic with how the companion ship between them grows. Also the subtle jealousy with katnappa's interest in jack.

FAN!