Excellent!

Woah... I'm not sure what to make of that story. It's confusing, but intriguing. I couldn't stop reading.

I read this story and, like many others, going by the other reviews, was initially very confused. Usually, if I find myself reading a confusing or incoherent piece of fan-fiction I give up and forget it, but this was different. It wasn't confusing for lack of good language or coherent plot, it was confusing in a way that I knew I was missing something; something important and genius that would change the way I read this beautiful piece of writing. So after finishing it, and feeling emotional and impressed by the touching story, even without fully understanding it, I went to the reviews and took a step back from my primary reading. This completely changed everything for me. After reading people's interpretations and considering the idea that Sherlock was in fact in a coma, trying to make sense of the sensations he was experiencing by constructing them into and elaborate reality in his mind, I re-read the story.
The second time round was a thousand times more gripping and beautiful, you're writing is intelligent and gripping and I cannot possibly begin to describe just how talented you are in creating such a resonating work.
I found this story by chance and am so grateful for it, I'm really quite shocked it hasn't had more recognition and recommendations. Well done, truly brilliant!

I love stories like this, all mysterious and stuff.

Fantastic piece
Thank you so much for sharing

Speculations on spoilers?

I wish I knew what was going on! At first I thought brain tumor, and Sherlock was just deleting hospital visits and so didn't understand all the flowers. It would explain the headaches, visual/auditory distortions and erratic behavior when he destroys the table. John tells Sherlock to quite going away, I'm thinking dissociative fugue as coping mechanism.

Then a lot of the reviewers said coma because of the last scene. Was everything a dream as Sherlock's brain tries to make sense of disjointed input? Then what about the hands? I could see this as coma recovery with short term memory loss.

But having read it again, I'm back to thinking brain tumor/TBI denial and the last scene is Sherlock coming out of surgery?

This is the best freaking piece of fiction ever! That ending... the twist... it's all so amazing!

That was absolutely fantastic, thank you!

Wow that started weird but it was all good.

I am...so confused. I don't it's I mean you write fantastically, and I'm sure if I knew what was going on I would absolutely love it but I am so confused what's going on here?

Oh, my. This was so beautiful. I didn't get it until I read the comments, and then I went over and read the story all over again, concentrating only on the dialogue. This is incredible.

I have no words for how awesome this story is. No words (THANK YOU).

This story terrifies me because I don't know what's going on and I just want Sherlock to be okay. A sequel from John?

Oh... Finally understood at the end. !
My, my; drags you in... still in astonishment. Gorgeous writing, dear! 3 Thank you for sharing.

mind blown