I hope you continue this. I have tried to find other Warcraft/ lord of the rings crossovers that are as good as this story but it is actually very difficult.

The introduction story is murder... It's so long and slow, that I am losing interest before even finding out if the actual story is good or not. You're trying to turn an introduction into a multi-faceted long story, with several happenings and points of views going on at once. There's barely any linear progress to be followed, if any. And this is just the intro. If this was mid-way through the story, this could be fine. But here? I am trying, but I can't make myself continue reading. Even when skipping ahead I find myself wondering about other things instead.

The worst part? Is that you're trying to make us care about several new random characters at once. Without giving us any real introduction for them first even. It's like reading a history book that jumps from topic to topic, after spending just 2-5 sentences on each character. I couldn't care less at this point.

Really good start. Some punctuation errors, though.

So just abandoned this one huh

You have not learnt to write a proper sentence. I'm not sure where you are learning how to write these proper sentences, but you need to find a better teacher.

In fact, if you are learning how to write proper sentences from other fan fictions, don't. Your chance of finding a fan fiction with proper sentences is worse than my chance of finding a proper sentence in this chapter.

It's not an exaggeration to say that maybe 90% of the sentences in this chapter are improper, in one form or another. Your biggest mistake is the run on sentences you have, seemingly replacing periods with commas. Your next biggest mistake is the amount of missing punctuation.

KILL KILL KILL!

How dare this mongrels make this cute dwarf cried!
REPENT! REPENT!

arrogant elves

Rosaria thinks Lothlorien is a pale imitation of Ashenvale? I find that ironic, since Lord of the Rings(the book) came out decades before World of Warcraft. Ashenvale is likely a copy of Lothlorien.

There are probably as many elf children in Lothlorien as there are in Ashenvale, because at this time the elves in Middle-earth were greatly diminished compared to the First and Second Ages.

UPDATE! plz?

I miss this story

Again, Awesome story, please update it again.

Please update this story again.

Continue and update joana turn eowyn into paladiness (save theodred )and make others (no deadknight) take more.

Fantastic story. Probably the second time I read it. Please update again.