Watched the little vampire again tonight and had to look up some TLV fanfiction cause Gregory is fine as hell! :D
Well done on this story, I thoroughly enjoyed it :D :D

Eh. This story has some unique and nice bits to it, and I'm not against sexually content if it suits a plot, but a teenage girl exposing herself hoping to lure a guy in? That's a bit... Wrong. Not just the age, but girls, don't do this. Not of you ever hope to find a long term guy who respects you. This behavior works to lure or create a horny guy who will say anything to get you in bed, use you, but move on from you when they're bored, or when the next form who'll flashes some skin their way comes along, or even worse, when someone they actually like and respect comes along and they want a girl they can have a real, long term relationship with. Catching a guy with sex is easy. Keeping him with it is impossible. You need substance. So don't throw your sexually charged body at a guy unless and until he is already yours and you already know you have mutual love, trust and respect for one another. Then go ahead and entice all you like, but yeah. Don't do this. Meeting or casually knowing a guy and showing off to catch him, then being retarded enough to think his kindness and affections equal love. (He's not going to say rude things to you if he wants to screw you, he will say anything, some guys will even lie and the the love word around. Use common sense people.) This made me dislike the character. Made her seem dense or like a guy.

I like it

love it jsut shut up and kiss me

i really like your ff. the story is very good and you spelling style is great too. could you please write a ff about freda and frederick, because I can not find any one.
sorry if there are faults, english is not my first language.

I loved this, it was sweet and brought a whole new side to Gregory. :3

damn ieveryone knows how 2 make a story but me :(

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Love it. Next chapter please.

Such a great story so far! Continue, please!

Holy crap! What a twist lol happy birthday!

Agh! The lemon! It burns my eyes! XD Haha but seriously the chapter's pretty good :)

I love this so far :) but the chapters should be longer. Keep up the awesome work!

I would like to read more, so update soon please! :)

that's a good start ! update soon !