This chapter was awesome! I love the way you've described heaven for the pirates, it sounds awesome! I'm sure we all know where Gutt went...Anyway, Raz's abilities of seeing the eaeth below are really cool! And I love how Raz and Squint have such a brother/sisterly relationship! It sounds so cute with her throwing him in the air and all! Plus I think the pasts you made up for Squint and Silas are really cool! This was truly a sweet chapter! Shira definitely added to the story, I feel sad that she had to see Raz's dead body, but at least Raz was able to tell her it was okay. That was really cool too!

And thanks so much for reccomending my stories! It means so much! Plus I'm really touched that you get inspired when reading my stories! I have something partially planned as far as another Raz story goes, since you seemed like you really wanted me to do more. It isn't quite totally thought out yet, but when I finally get at least part of it up I hope you enjoy it!

Shira getting her earrings? That would be an awesome one-shot for 'Survival at Seas'! I don' t know exactly how it would work either, but it would be awesome! Again, I love the sibling relationship shown between Raz and Squint! Squint is my second fav pirate! Update soon! ttouched

I liked it alot

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, this was so sad and sweet at the same time! I felt bad that she had a fractured rib and a messed up shoulder and wrist. But I was so happy that she went to heaven! She got to see her bevoled brothers and had weapons of all kinds beyond the eye could see! And silver chalices to drink out of and delicious food! So wonderful! This is SO going on my favs list!

Awesome! The details and the writing are amazing, dude. Finally, something different other than the ShiraxDiego ones. Please make more! :)

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