Yeah no, if some guy I had just recently met flirted that aggressively despite my clear and repeated noninterest I would not let that stand. Totally not okay move in Sideswipe's part. I can't wait until Luka puts her foot down when she gets fed up and show him enough is enough. Really well written! Love it a lot!

more pleaz

I know it's been a while since you updated, but I'm really enjoying the story and would love to read more! :)

This is so cool!

When are you going to update this story its been so long since you update. Please update I miss this story and its been to long. I hope u didn't forget about this story or gave up on it please update soon.
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Pleeeeaaaase update! This is so good! I have an idea fir the story: Lula could get hurt protecting the children from Decepticons or the assassin the organization would send after her. She would probably push them out of the way and take the hit.

Please please please continue this story it's amazing

Please continue with this fanfic. It's amazing and I really want to know if she changes into a different person at the end.

Please update soon

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! I absolutely love this story and I'm dying to read more about Luca! I honestly think she should go for Sideswipe. I can imagine Bee being the older brother figure and Sideswipe being the annoying flirting aft that she later learns to love. Or, maybe there could even be a bit of a love triangle with Sideswipe and Mirage! Ohhh! That would be epic! Anyway, that's just my opinion! Please continue! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!

This is a great fanfic, Luka's really cool! :) Please update soon!

i like your oc she's got spunk...man an assassin is sooooo cooool! but i kinda feel bad for the cons when they end up messing with her...actually i lied i'm lookin forward to it! heheheheheheh

Please update! This is no doubt one of my ultimate favorite stories ever!

Personally, I'm shipping (I hate the tern shipping, but it is appropriate) Sideswipe/Luka

Sideswipe is my love, as pathetic as it sounds. Honestly, I could care less what people think

ANYWHO, please update! (GO SIDESWIPE)

THAT SIDESWIPE THOUGH! ;*

Ohh this is getting good... What would happen if sunny showed up though I wonder?

I really like this story so far. It's excellent. It's completely different from many thing I've read so far. Besides a few grammatical errors here and there it is very well written and detailed. I can't wait to see where you go with this story. And I also really like your OC, Luka. I have a feeling that under all that stoic-ness, she's got a good heart but just doesn't know how to show it. I can see she's already starting to show a personality by the way she is showing different emotions, either the be good or bad. Anyway is she going to be paired with someone? I like the subtle hints that you have presented so far. Is she gonna have some situations like that with mirage, optimus, and ratchet as well? Also does she actually show her skills while fighting a decepticon? I'd totally love to see that? And last question, could she possibly be wanted for some reason by the decepticons and would it have to do with her past maybe and why her eyes are purple/lavender? Update soon! I wanna find out more! Keep up the great work! :))))