First fanfic? Damn. I'm impressed - like, achingly heartbroken impressed. I'm surprised no one has thought of this particular plot twist, but it's cruel and perfect. Great job!

She still died!? horrible story! :(

Awesome twist! Love it!

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Whoa. THAT was your first fic? Your FIRST? That was the most amazing, emotional, tear inducing thing I read ever since Dobby died! Wow, I don't even have words.

wow it was amazing I really wish it was something like that in TV GOD I just wish it was sth like that. Great story, personaly I think Jo and Dean were perfect for each other and anyone who is writing about them is my personal favourite:D I just hoped for another chapter what happen? what did Dean said to her? we (Jo and Dean shipper) need all the fluff we can get.
ps great work as the first story:D

Great story. Well done. I enjoy reading it.

Oh. My. God.
This was absolutely FABULOUS. I'ma hardcore Dean/Jo shipper, so the amount that I enjoyed this was immense :D
Reminds me of Mystery Spot, too, hehe.