Reviews for Fathers
Guest chapter 1 . 7/13
Nice story, but I want to mention a couple of grammatical errors. When Reid said “he left my mom and I” it should say “he left my mom and me”. Likewise, when Hotch said “join Jack and I for dinner” it should be “join Jack and me”. This is a common grammatical error, but the trick is to pretend the other person isn’t part of the statement, as in “he left me” or”join me for dinner”. That way, you’ll always get it right! Thanks for sharing your story. It showed a fatherly affection of Hotch toward Reid that was quite nice.
wayiiseewriting chapter 1 . 4/23
Very touching.
Caroliny Hotchner chapter 1 . 10/4/2019
Hello all well. I loved your story. Beautiful. I hope you have more.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2019
This was really sweet, hotch and reid always had a good bond but the show cut it out a few seasons before Thomas left
pallyndrome chapter 1 . 7/4/2019
Great story :)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2018
THAT IS THE CUTEST FREAKING THING PARDON ME WHILE I GO DIE OVER HERE OMG THANK YOU FOR THIS
Rookblonkorules chapter 1 . 11/24/2017
That was amazing, wow!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17/2016
This had me outrageously fangirling so many times. Love it!
Sweetmd24 chapter 1 . 1/3/2016
a really great story! thank you for sharing!
Vendelyn Silverhawk chapter 1 . 7/8/2014
This is absolutely adorable! The way you describe the physicality of the team is truly indicative of their characters and very well done, and you capture Hotch and Reid's voices very well!

your faithful reader,

V.S.
Susan M. M chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
Nice characterization.
Alena13 chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
cute :) Thank you
mummacass chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
Damn good story, and one I found by accident!
dolphinrain chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
Nice little oneshot. I like Reid n Hotch (not slash). One of my fav scenes is Revelations when Reid hugs Hotch. But anyway, nice little story.
Pheonix1995 chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
So cute - Glad Reid has a father in his life who cares for him!
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